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Re: A freestyle about Samruai Legends
Kai Okarian - 24.08.2006, 14:13A freestyle about Samruai Legends
Hidy. I wrote this really fast (less than 10 mins), so if possible, I'd like some constructive criticism.
Samurai Legends
By: Chase Coleman
Clans Asai and Takeda are at war
Their troops viciously clashing
Gaining honor from their actions
Rise mighty heroes
Defend your lords honor
Fight for the victory of your clan
Destroy your enemies
Emerge victorious
The Ronin
A samurai with no lord
He fights to regain his honor
To gain a lord
His strikes quick and plentiful
Striking from the air
He stuns his foes with his might
Chanting a poem of death
He strikes fear into the heart
Whirling his blade about
He rips his foes apart
The Yari Samurai
Using an ancestral spear
Granted from his forefathers
His might causes foes to blanch
His rage is legendary
Granting him further strength and power
His Sha Technique
Striking many at once
Swinging his spear with much power
Knocking back his foe many yards
The mighty power of the Oni demon
Striking death into many a soul
The Yumi Samurai
Using her powerful longbow
Striking from far
Strafing around the enemy
Shooting arrows into their throats
Training for years
Aiding her accuracy
Laying down traps
Hitting with surprise
Shooting a rain of arrows
She annihilates all in her path
The queen of siege warfare
The Warlord
Riding a mighty steed
With his mighty banner
Raising his troops morale
Extensive first aid training
Enabling his army to fight on
His rare and mighty gun
Casting fear into the heart and spirit of his foe
The mighty soul of the dragon
Burning all who stand in the path to victory
The Ninja
A silent warrior
His throwing stars
Striking vital points
Ancient vanishing tricks
Appearing next to a foe
Disappearing before retaliation
Entangling enemies in hemp
Stopping all in their path
Many daggers of fury
Stabbing many in their wrath
The Shinobi
An ancient master
Walking the path of death
He sows doom in his way
Abstraction
Never where you believe him to be
The darkness is his ally
Fear its restoritive power
The mighty shadow
His one last surviving friend
Heroes to fight for honor
Heroes to fight for glory
In the name of their lords
Go!
Mighty heroes!
Destroy the opposing clan
Vanquish all in your path
Bring honor to your family
Honor to yourself
Create your own Legend
Mighty Samurai
Re: A freestyle about Samruai Legends
nooK - 27.08.2006, 23:48
I like it :P
Re: A freestyle about Samruai Legends
Lyncor - 28.08.2006, 16:34
Reads quite well, Kai. I quite like it :D
Nice work.
Re: A freestyle about Samruai Legends
Shadow Phoenix - 04.09.2006, 06:06
Wow, no critisim here man.
Very poetic, worthy to be connected to the great map, Samurai Legends.
Two thumbs up from this critic. :D
Mac.
Re: A freestyle about Samruai Legends
PhiniX - 16.10.2006, 12:14
wow awesome poems :o rly nice done .. just 5/5 8)
Re: A freestyle about Samruai Legends
PhiniX - 16.10.2006, 12:42
I also make poems :lol: here's mine for the /|/inja .. my favourite hero :D comments plz ... and credit if you like it : 8)
- /|/inja -
Walking in Shadows ...
... Dissapearing in fogs
Stalking in the Night...
... Pain in his eyes
Shuriken in his Hands ...
... Waiting for the right moment
..... It's just one moment ..
Which distinguish between life and death ....
... And then you see the daggers fly
Hitting your body ...
... Smog devours your breath
And if thousand and thousand bloody tears are crying for you ...
... You know there's no more hope for you
Cause /|/inja's twilight came over you ...
hope you like it 8)
Re: A freestyle about Samruai Legends
Omerta - 16.10.2006, 13:26
Poem is nice, but
is your friend too. Abuse him instead of reply button.
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