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    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 03.01.2009, 22:42

    vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome
    But before we start some rules:

    1. no going off-topic please ;)
    2. every creature as a character is allowed, but vampires are mostly welcome for it's a vampire story (or at least shall be one :roll: )
    3. give others a chance to post, too, and don't write the story all on your own (that's a rule especially for me I fear :roll: )
    4. this story plays in a fantasy world. So just write up what comes to your mind, as ackward as it might be. Everything is possible in fantasy :twisted:
    5. before you join it would be nice if you gave a brief introduction to your character. What kind of creature you are and if you're good or evil etc :D


    Have fun!

    PS: This is actually more like a role-play than a story :roll:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 04.01.2009, 01:05


    i'm all game ,just don't know which gender i'll play.
    but i'll be a Vampire ,who knows several fighting sports.
    and ofcourse the superstrenght & jump thingy that every Vamp ahs.
    don't want to drink human blood ,that's for sure.

    got any diea which gender i'll be?
    a woman has the advantage of using her "speciall skills"

    a woman it is :D
    hhmm.. now all that's left is a name
    lemme see... can't find any so will add that later



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 04.01.2009, 11:12


    I'll be a vampire, too (what a surprise :roll: ), and I'll be a female one. I got turned by another vampire against my will about 200 years ago and I'm searching for that vampire to kill him.
    I drink blood when I have to (although I find it disgusting). I'm a nightwalker, I die in sunlight. I try to avoid vampire hunters but when they come to close to me I kill them :twisted: I don't hate being a vampire, I even like it's advanteges (super strenght, the vampirehypnotising skill :roll: , healing powers and the knowledge about good and evil I gained with the years of my lifetime), but I miss the sun and my friends and family who all died long ago. I avoid making friends, because I can't stand seeing them becoming older and older and dieing while I stay the same and survive.
    I look human most of the time, but when I turn vampire my eyes become black and my teeth grow bigger. :twisted:
    I change my name every now and then (creating new identities makes it easier to survive because noone asks how the person with that name can live so long), but the name I had before I got turned was Lynn.


    That's all you need to know for the beginning. Everything else will be added during the story :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 05.01.2009, 19:54


    hhmm.. i wonder how you've come up with your story :P
    specially the black eyes thingy ;) *cough* "Henry" *cough cough* :lol:

    i'm more like Mick.
    wishing to become human once again ,so i could finally die & be released from the heavy burden that comes with being a vampire (see Idrils discription and you'll know what i mean ;) )

    still haven't found a name. i know. Jessica aKa Jess



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 05.01.2009, 20:32


    well, I had to choose between red and black eyes and because I like black more than red I will have black eyes :twisted: But I have to admit that Henry also ... well... influenced my decision a bit :roll:

    I think Jessica is a good name.


    aaaah I just see, this is horrible off-topic!!! *blushes*


    Let's start with the story ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 06.01.2009, 21:28


    (please note: The vampire in the first part is not my character, Lynn. It's the vampire, who turned me!)

    The story starts in a little villiage. It's night, a dark, rainy and cold night. Everyone is hiding in the little houses, which all have seen better days. Everything is dark and quiet except for the little saloon. You can hear people laugh and scream and music playing.
    Noone recognises the lonely rider entering the villiage. The rider stops his horse in front of the saloon. The door opens and a drunken man comes out, still singing his last song and drinking of his last beer. He sees the rider.
    "Hey, you!", he says. Or at least try, for he isn't in full control of his tounge anymore. "Wha are ya doin her'?"
    The rider just watches him, not moving, not speaking.
    "He!" The drunken man staggers a little closer, pointing with his finger at the rider. "I asked ya a question *hicks*. "Wha are ya doin her'? We do not like strangers in our village."
    The rider still doesn't move.
    The man looks at him, his eyes almost closed, because he doesn't see one rider anymore but three. Or five?
    He throws up. "Na, ya not a fella to talk to.", he says and turns around. "This world is goin to the dogs! *hicks*" He stops, streches his arms out wide and screams: "Apocalypse, I welcome ya!"
    Then he marches on, not recognising the lonely rider following him, untill it's too late.
    Between two houses he does his last scream, when the rider attacks him from behind and breaks his neck. In the darkness of the shadows the rider then starts to drink his victims blood. The rider is not a human being. It's a vampire. And it's victim was a vampire hunter, for this villiage is a villiage of hunters. And the rider came to kill them all.

    almost 200 years later

    I enter the villiage in which I got turned almost 200 years ago. Or better said: I enter what's left of it. Noone came to build up the houses again for people say this place was haunted. Now there are only ruins.
    Night is almost over and I have to find a place to hide myself from the sun. I dare not to remember what happened that night, but I feel how the hatred in my chest grows. My family and my friends died here. Painfully. All killed by the same vampire, who is known as Son of the Devil or Nightwalker. There are only a few who know his real name. Like me.
    I find a place to hide when I hear a sound.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 06.01.2009, 23:37


    ooh wow ,i do not dare to write this aprt.
    Please write a bit more. this is thrilling !!



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 07.01.2009, 09:17


    oh my :lol: I will do so when I'm home again from university ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 07.01.2009, 20:41


    cool.
    ...and when is that :P :lol:
    i'll be patient. .. i think ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 07.01.2009, 23:19


    I raise my head and sniff. What I hear is a soft cry.
    It's hard to fight the memories back. I see fire and blood. I hear screams and breaking wood. Like a lightening in my head.
    I get up and walk down what once had been the main street of this villiage.
    The crying gets louder the nearer I come.
    I stop in front of the ruins of the saloon.
    I sniff again.
    What I smell is evil. The whole villiage stinks like evil. But there is also something else I can smell. A sense of life. And blood.
    I finally found the reason for the crying. It's a little baby-dog, almost dead. The demons already feeded on him. He's hardly breathing anymore and his body is covered with blood.
    I kneel down and watch the dog.
    The smell of the blood awakes the vampire in me. It tells me to grab it and suck it out untill there is nothing left. The dog is almost dead anyway. It would only ease it's pain.
    But I can control myself. I fight the vampire in me untill it's only a whistle in my head.
    The dog has stopped crying. I know I can't help it, but I can comfort it's death.
    Carefully I pick the babydog up and carry it back to where I wanted to hide for this night.
    I lay the dog down and touch it's head gently. I know the dog is going to die within the next minutes and it hurts my heart. But there is nothing I can do.
    Three minutes later the dog takes it's last breath. But I know that this breath at least wasn't taken in fear.
    I burry the babydog in a little grave.
    Just like I burried my family.
    What was left of them.
    I send the memories away again and lay down to sleep.
    I'm just glad that vampires don't dream.

    PS: eddiefever I sent you a p.m. ;)
    and now someone else has to continue the story, because otherwise I will be the only one writing and that hurts the rules we made ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 09.01.2009, 14:28


    ooh wow ,sooo sad.
    i've been writing on this a bit.
    but i don't have time to copy it from my blocknote ,cause i have visitors.
    (had the day off ,cause i needed to continu my drivers-lessons)
    so i'll try to post it later



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 09.01.2009, 18:15


    ok, we will wait ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 12.01.2009, 15:15


    hey, eddiefever! We're still waiting ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 12.01.2009, 23:41


    i'm sorry ,soo sorry.

    somewhere in the nearby forrest ,there was an odd sound.. not belonging to any of the inhabitants.
    a sound that made even the smallest animal flee to find a save place to hide.
    there it went ,drawing closer and closer to the village.

    *sniff sniff* smelling a sent that didn't belong.
    who was it from? and where was it? is what went on inside the crearture's mind.
    walking through the village.
    at ease ...but fully alert


    (better?)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 12.01.2009, 23:52


    yep yep ;) It's good!!!

    I will add something to it on thursday ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 13.01.2009, 00:12


    good :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 13.01.2009, 14:03


    hopefully ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 15.01.2009, 21:14


    For vampires sunset is what brings them back to life. One second they're dead. No breath, no heartbeat. And the other second they're alive. But it takes time untill they really wake up. And the older they get, the longer it takes.
    For a normal human being it still might be less then a second untill the vampire opens his eyes and is in full use of his powers again. But for a hunter this time is more than he needs to kill a vampire.
    During this second every vampire is scared. Or at least those who know about the danger that lies in this second.
    I was scared to death.
    Well, that's kinda funny, because actually I am already dead.
    But I'm still scared.
    I can't wait to open my eyes. For me this second is like a lifetime. I wait for the pain of wood in my chest, my heart.
    But nothing happens. And when I finally open my eyes no hunter is in sight.
    I sit up.
    I can feel the demons around me, under me. But since I'm here they didn't dare to come out again.
    It's usual that demons make left behind places their home. They are the "ghosts" hunting old castles and ruins.
    But it's easier for them to open a door to hell in a deserted place than in a place where are still people running around. And some people nowadays still know how to fight demons.
    You can't imagine a door to hell like a real door. It's more like a very small, for untrained eyes unvisible cut in this dimension. But I can see it. And I can see the demons. And they are the reason why I'm here.
    I free myself from the leaves and dirt and pieces of wood I put over me to protect me from the sun. And from maybe too corious eyes.
    I'm not here to kill the demons. I know how that works, but it is not my job to kill them and to bring them back to where they belong and to fix the cut between the dimensions. This is work for people who are trained for it. And I haven't come here to do their job.
    I came to ask the demons for help.
    I know this sounds crazy. Ask a demon for help.
    I can almost hear the voices in my head telling me how crazy I am and that the demon is going to kill me.
    I can't help smiling.
    People have no idea about demons. Even their hunters don't most of the time. There are only very few living things in this dimension who know about demons.
    And I'm one of them.
    I won't tell you from where and how I got that knowledge. It's a bloody story and one of those stories I rather push far away in my mind.
    I brought everything with me that I need to bring a demon here that's powerful enough to help me. And I also have everything I need to pay that demon.
    Against common fears you don't need a life to pay a demon.
    But you can't pay a demon with money or gold or any other material good.
    I can hear how the demons start to whipser when they see how I start to prepare the ritual. They're corious. Waiting. Impatient.
    Their whisper is like a soft wind, which makes you shiver.
    But I can hear how they talk to each other.
    "Look!"
    "What is she doing!"
    "Ritual!"
    "She's going to ask one of us!"
    "She needs one of us!"
    I ignore their whisper and their plans about what they're going to do if they're finally free.
    Not only humans are stupid, some demons are stupid, too. They have no idea that they're still tied to hell untill the person who called them, set them free.
    Maybe I should give you some details about demons.
    Demons are creatures from hell. Noone know where they came from, not even the mightiest and oldest of them. They might be cursed souls, who are not allowed to enter the doors of heaven, but I doubt that.
    Demons are only shadows and soft wind, tied to the place where the were born. Hell. As long as you're not trained to see them you wont see them. And even if you're trained it doesn't mean you can see all of them because there are plenty of different kinds of demons. Demons don't have red or yellow or green or other nicly coloured eyes like in so many stories. They don't have eyes. They don't have faces or figures either. They are shadows moved by some dark, secret, invisible magic.
    And they usually can't harm anything or anyone as long.
    Now you wonder "What happend to the dog then? You said it had been attacked by demons."
    Well, I said the truth. And I ask you to remember that I said "usually they can't harm anything". Some demons can. And it always depends on in what mental stadium the attacked thing is. That dog was lost, desperate. Maybe it had been alone for days, not able to feed itself.
    That is something demons are able to attack.
    And when demons attack it's always horrible and bloody.
    But back to "basic knowledge about demons".
    Demons are mostly creatures of the night.
    Like me.
    Like him.
    This doesn't mean they're unable to move in daylight. They can, they just don't like it.
    Good for me.
    The ritaul you have to perform is very easy. Nothing with pentagrams and curses etc like in stories. All you need is the name of the demon you want to call, your desire and something to pay the demon. And as long as you don't set it free you wont have to protect yourself either, because the demon can't attack you. Except you're in a bad mental condition. But then you wont survive long enough to perform the ritual anyway.
    And never - as payment - promise to set the demon free! Never! Because either hell will break loose if you set it free or the demon will make your life be like hell. Never forget to pay a demon and never promise something you can't keep.
    I think that is enough you need to know for now.
    I have my name (actually I have a whole book with names), I have my desire and I have my payment.
    When I take the book out of my bad the demons start to whisper even louder. The soft wind becomes stronger.
    I lit a candle.
    Actually you don't need a candle, but I need some light to read the name in the book. I am able to see in the dark, but I don't want to make a mistake either. Because that can have really bad consequences.
    I open the book to the page with the name I need.
    But I don't speak it.
    I can hear how the demons fight against their boundaries. How much they want to be free.
    I have my eyes fixed on that name. But my mouth is shut.
    If this ritual will be succesful all things will be changed. Forever. Everything.
    My heart beats against my ribs. Almost painfully. My breath seems to be unnaturaly loud.
    The desire to speak the name, to change everything, the power I have at this moment.
    It's hard to control.
    I want to scream the name. Not speak it.
    I want to order my desire, not ask for help.
    I want to feel the power.
    The candle breaks in my hand, because I squeezed it too much. Suddenly everything is dark again.
    And the whisper of the demons and the voices in my head telling me to finally perform the rital even louder. Almost a storm.
    I can see the name like it was glowing in the dark. It's impossible for me to read any of the other names. It's impossible to look somewhere else. I just stare on this one name.
    And then I speak it.



    Sorry, I fear I have to stop here. I could go on forever, but this post is already horribly long. I will continue later.
    aaaaaah I feel so creative at the moment! I want to continue writing my books sooooo much!!! But I know when I start now I wont be able to get back to learning and that's bad..... aaaaaaah what a misere.... :roll:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 15.01.2009, 23:34


    Could somebody just please write something? I want to continue!!!! :roll:

    eddiefever, where are you???? Save my brain from exploding because there are too many ideas in it. :oops:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 16.01.2009, 19:48


    ooh wow ,that was extremely thrilling ,but why did you stop!!
    ULISAR VERNON !!!!

    as the letters fall from her lips the door flies open with a Bang.

    "NO !!!!!!"
    "I'm to late"
    falling on her knies as she blacks out.
    the creature from the forrest ,that's who she was.

    Lynn heard it all ,but couldn't draw her attention to it.
    that would have been to dangerous.
    not only for her .. for the female.. but for the world!!

    a huge wirlwind appeared.........



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 16.01.2009, 22:17


    Because my post was already so long and if I hadn't stopped writing I had went on forever :roll:

    The huge whirlwind is a mix of all the other demons, angry because I didn't call one of them.
    But then the whirlwind disappeares. It has to make way for something else. Something else from the other dimension. From hell.
    The cut opens and something starts to crawl through it. It has to sqeeze itself through the cut.
    My mouth is dry. The look of it is so horrible that I, even after those 200 years in which I have seen so many things, want to scream.
    What comes through the cut is the demon I called.
    "What do you want?", the demon asks, still squeezing his blackness through the cut.
    "I... I have a desire.", I say.
    My voice sounds weak. I want to run away, but I can't.
    "And I ask you for help."
    "You need me." The voice of the demon is like thunder in my head. It hurts. My hands start to shake. The book falls down to the floor.
    "Yes, I need you."
    "Aaah.", the demon makes. He suffers as he tries to wide the cut. His figure is too big for it, but he can't help going through it, because I called him. And he wants to get through it. To bring evil and death. War and fire. And absolute darkness.
    "What is your desire?"
    The more he gets of himself through the cut the more power his voice gains.
    "There once was one from my kind...", I start. But the pain in my head breaks my voice. I can hardly breath. "...who made a deal with you." I continue out of breath.
    It becomes cold. So cold that my breath pains little clouds into the air.
    "There were many of your kind who made deals with me." The demon made it through the cut. Only the little bond keeps him under control.
    "But only one who didn't pay." I feel down on my knees, unable to control my shaking hands.
    I can feel the anger of the demon rise.
    "And I know that you weren't able to punish him."
    "Is he what you want?", the demon asks, but it's like thousand voices screaming at the same time.
    "Yes." I can hardly keep my thoughts together. I can hardly concentrate. Maybe it was not a good idea to call for one of the most powerful and oldest demons in hell.
    The demon jumps forward, but the bond keeps him away from me.
    "Can YOU pay me?", he asks.
    I nodd. "Help me to find him, so that I can kill him."
    "That is difficult."
    "But not impossible."
    "Depending on what you offer."
    "I offer you..." I hesitate. There is a part of me who tells me to break the deal and to run away. To leave this place and never come back again.
    But I can't.
    I have been searching for 200 years now. And I couldn't find him. I need this help.
    "What?"
    "I offer you a bond with me. A bond to this world."
    The demon makes a surprised move. "Continue."
    "You will help me to find him. And then you can punish him for not paying you. You can't as long as you're not tied to this world in any way. I know about his protections." I speak in haste. I want this to be over. A bad dream.
    But vampires don't dream.
    "If you create a bond to my soul you have a bond to this world. And then no protection can protect him from you."
    The demon comes closer again.
    "So you offer me a part of your soul."
    I nodd.
    "You know about the consequences."
    Again I can only nodd.
    "And still you are sure."
    "I want him dead. And I need your help." My voice shakes. Just like the rest of my body.
    If demons had faces this one would definitaly be smiling.
    "I agree.", he says.
    "Then find him for me."
    From noise to absolute silent. That's how one could describe what happened in this seconds.
    Nothing dared to moce while the demon fell silent and searched for him. For the one I want to kill for so long. Since he killed my family and friends. Since he left me. Turned. Tortured. Alone. Covered by blood between dead boodies.
    I kneel in front of the demon. I can breath easier now. But it's still cold.
    And then he comes back.
    Being beaten up by a vampire hunter before he kills you can't be compared to this comeback. This pain is far more worse.
    "I found him.", the demon says.
    "Where is he?"
    "You have to go south from here. To the Great Lakes. Cross them on a ship and wander through the Dark Forest. You will find him in the Mountains of Death."
    The way get's burned into my head. I see pictures of it. And then I see him.
    "My payment!", the demon screams and the pictures fade away.
    I pull a knife out of my pocket. The demon forms a cup of darkness.
    "Fill it with your blood!", he says un patiently. "So that I can drink it and fill it with mine. You drink it. And this way the bond will be created."
    I grunt when I cut my hand with the knife. Blood comes out of it. I hold my hand over the cut.
    A few drops are enough.
    The cup disappeares in the demon.
    I drop the knife and hold my bleeding hand. It hurts, for this knife wasn't a usual knife. It was a knife specially made for such rituals.
    The cup comes back, filled with the darkest darkness. Demon's blood.
    I strech my hand out for the cup.
    The liquid in there doesn't move like normal blood. It's something thicker. Like mud.
    "Drink it! Drink it! DRINK IT!" The demon says.
    I raise the cup to my lips.
    This is the last chance for me to break the ritual. From destroying what is left of me.
    I drink it.
    I am unable to describe the pain I feel when the demon's blood touches my skin. I drop the cup. I break down screaming. I'm burning from the inside. I scream.
    And the demon laughs.
    And then it is over.
    The demon goes back to hell and everything goes back to normal.
    I can hear the voices of the other demons around me.
    "Look!"
    "What she did!"
    "Is she dead?"
    "No, she isn't."
    I open my eyes.
    I lie flat on the ground. The place around the cut is covered by ice.
    A look around tells me that sunrise is close.
    I need a place to hide.
    But I can't get up.
    I crawl.
    I gather up my knife, my book, my bag and all that belongs to me.
    And I crawl back to the place where I already spent the last night.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 16.01.2009, 23:32


    ooh my frikkin'.....
    why'd you do that!!!
    have you gone insane!!!
    YIEKS!!.
    i'm stunned right now :shock:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 12:07


    Really? Is it bad...? :?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 15:05


    no ,the story is Amazing

    but why did Lynn exchanged her soul to such a demon .
    Yikes!!! :cry: :cry:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 15:08


    She didn't exchange it, she only tied it to the demon ;) There is a bond now. She isn't a soulless creature now, don't worry. She's still a vampire.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 15:22


    Add something, eddiefever!!! I wanna continue!!! :D :D :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 18:38


    :lol: why should i be the one to add something.
    there are more members :P
    i'd like it if they'd play along as well.
    just like the old dayz ;)
    it'll be fun :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 19:29


    yeah, but honestly I think we're the only ones playing. The other who's join are never here... :?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 20:25


    true :?


    ... leaving the stranger behind who had collapsed from the long voyage to stop this madness before it was to late...
    but it was...To Late!!

    day had gone bye swift ,but for the stranger it had been a living hell.
    re-living memories that had long been forgotten.

    remembering the last time that the demon was called upon.
    it had taken her teacher ..her 'father' all the power that his body had to get the demon back to where he belonged.

    now it was up to her to finish the task once again.
    but this time things were different...
    how will she ever complete this task without losing her sanity.....


    so what do you think?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 20:36


    I think it's good. ;)
    But one question: Did your character see me making the deal with the Demon or did she see somebody else? I need to know this before I can continue ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 20:39


    i'll let you know in a PM what my plan is.
    so we won't spoil thinsg for the rest...
    if anyone is reading ,lol



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 20:40


    ok ;) Write fast :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 20:49


    done!!

    *wonders what she'll think of it all*



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 21:01


    I wrote you what I think of it and now I will hurry and write my next part ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 21:14


    Evening comes again and I wake up. I feel terrible. Every inch of my body hurts.
    I remember what happened last night.
    The other demons are still whispering.
    I have to go south.
    I get up. Slowly.
    I take out a map of this area out of my bag.
    The Great Lake is far away. I will need at least five weeks, even if I run all night.
    Suddenly hunger stabs like a knife into my stomach.
    Blood. I need blood.
    But there is nothing I can feed from.
    The next villiage is a nighttravel away.
    I have to reach it.
    Hunger makes me stumble. I almost fall.
    I….have….to….reach…..the villiage.


    (I know, compared to the others posts this one is quite short :roll: )



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 21:47


    the stranger awakens from a sound
    it seems that somethings is dragged on the ground.

    she gets up.. still a bit shaky from her 'nightmares' .. she holds on to the door and looks outside.
    there just a yard away from her ...
    is the person who had opend the gates to hell.
    dragging herself towards the woods.

    Jessica can't let her go like that..
    not after what she has done :evil:

    she takes a sprint towards her.
    within seconds she is at the girls spot and grabs her by both her arms.

    where do you think your going to?!!
    the words struck her like stakes piercing through her heart.
    sooo full of hate
    but she could only sigh.
    she was to weak to speak

    Jessica looked at the womans face
    than it hit her.... she's a Vamp to !! :shock: :o

    your... your... *shugs* you need blood right?
    the woman looks at her... gazed of what the unknown female was asking her.

    how did she know? what gave it away?
    is she a hunter?
    she gets ripped out of her thoughts when she feels she's being carried.

    wha... what are yo ..you doing with me.

    without looking at her Jessica says" : i'm going to give you "food"
    both knowing what it really ment.
    what about... aren't you going to kill me?
    "No ,i won't" Jessica replied honestly
    the lady sighed in relieve.

    Jessica took her back to the shack where the lady had done the ritual.
    cause that was where Jessica left her bag when she ran after her.

    after she made a fire ,she heated something up in a cup.
    the lady had gotten anxious.. what are you doing!!
    how is this going to help me !! ; she said
    sshhh... Jessiaca said.
    you'll see in a minute.

    a minute later the brew was ready.
    Jessica: "drink this"
    the lady looked in the cup and there it was.
    heated up blood.
    she glanced at Jessica with a confused look.
    "it's this or nothing... your choice"
    in Jessica's eyes the lady had thought for to long.. so she grabbed the cup.
    "noo.. no no no.. it's good"
    jessica didn't speak as the lady took a sip from the cup.
    hhmm.. this is still pretty tasty. hadn't thought it would be.

    Jessica smiled ,cause what the lady didn't know is that it wasn't really blood.
    it had been a special mix that her 'father' had made for her & himself to survive without killing innocent ppl.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 22:12


    Wow! That was a really long post! ;)
    I just wonder why my character didn't "smell" your character? Because it seems like you were close to the villiage (or did I get that wrong?) and my character didn't recognise anything else but her, the dog and the demons...
    And are we the same kind of vampires or is there a difference?



    My hunger is so strong that I don’t recognise what I drink. But then, when my strength comes back, I recognise the taste is slightly different.
    I spit out what I still have in my mouth and I strow the cup away.
    “What is this?”, I scream jumping to my feet.
    “It’s food.” The other woman also gets to her feet.
    “It’s not!”, I say angrily. “What did you give me there?” I’m searching for any sing of a reaction to poison in my body (yeah, it is possible to poison a vampire) but there is nothing.
    “It’s not bad!”, the woman says with a defensive voice.
    “Who are you?”
    The woman laughs. Anger comes back. “I saved your life after you made a deal with that demon. And all you gotta do is to scream at me?”
    “Oh, I’m so sorry!”, I say sarcasticly. “But what I did overthere is not – of – your – business!”
    “As soon as anyone makes a deal with that demon it is! How could you do that? How could you be so stupid!”
    “Don’t call me stupid!”
    “I call you what I want!”
    I stand in front of her within seconds, my hand around her neck, the vampire in me almost free. “Go on like this and you die!”
    “You’re the one who is going to die if you don’t put your hand away from there!”, the woman says without fear. “Now!”
    But I don’t move. “You’ve seen vampires before.”, I say with a slight smile.
    The woman looks away.
    And then I realise it.
    “You are a vampire.”
    She looks at me again, showing what she really is. “Yes, I am. And right now I’m stronger than you! So if you don’t put your hand away now I’m going to kill you!”
    I smile. “Try me.”
    She pushs my hand away. “I don’t want to fight with you!”
    “A second ago you wanted to kill me.”
    “I don’t save people’s life just to kill them a few minutes later!”
    “Well, I know plenty of creatures who love to do so.”
    She looks at me, full of hate. “Just because I can control myself doesn’t mean that I don’t want to kill you.”
    “Are you scared?” I smile.
    The attack comes fast, but I block it. I must admit that I’m a bit surprised. She is stronger than she seems. But still not one of my enemies. I don’t show her any sign of my surprise, I just push her back.
    But I can see the surprise on her face.
    “How can you…. How can you be so strong again already? You didn’t even drink half of what you’d need to recover from this!”
    I laugh. “Self-control, my dear.”
    She gets angry again. “Don’t laugh about me! I know how to fight, too!”
    I pick up my bag. “Yeah, sure.” I get my stuff together. “If you don’t mind, I will get myself some real blood now!” I turn around, ready to go.
    She grabs my shoulder.
    “I won’t let you kill anyone!”
    I push her hand away. “Do you really think vampires kill everytime they drink? What do you know about your own kind anyway?”


    (I'm sorry my character is so mean, but your character kind of ruined her plans and she absolutely is no friend of things she doesn't know. And she hates to depend on others. ;) )



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 22:20


    :lol: :lol: and your saying that :P :P
    she sure is fisty. :lol:

    and eyes i am a different kind of Vampire..
    you'll find out eventually :P

    PS: your character was to busy with mentally preparing for the ritual ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 22:33


    ok ;)

    Add some story I want to continue :D :D :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 22:35


    you always want to continue :P
    hhmm.. i'm not quite sure what to write



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 22:38


    just something! Only one sentence!!! I can go on then. I just don't want to hurt the rules. :roll:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 22:47


    they are NOT my kind , Jessica said full of hate.
    and don't ever think other wise. you got that..
    Jessica's grib tightens

    the lady hadn't forseen this.

    oke oke.. sjeesh ,get a grip
    and i don't mean that litterally. ,she says eyelocking Jessica.
    it calms her a bit .. she lets go.

    don't let me find out that you did kill someone.. or you'll regret that decission ,Jessica said before she vanished into thin air


    good enough for ya :P



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.01.2009, 23:01


    more than good! :D

    I stand there looking at the place where she had been just a few seconds ago.
    Then I swear. Badly.
    And finally I am able to turn south.
    I’m strong enough to run, so that I reach the next villiage during the same night. But I’m weak again.
    I’m not sure if I had beaten that girl in a fight, but I surely had given her a hard time.
    “A vampire witch. That’s definitaly the last thing this world needs.”
    I enter the villiage.
    I don’t need long until I find a victime who is willing to give some of his blood to me.
    I don’t kill, when I drink. Only if the person I drink from is a hunter. But otherwise I never kill. I take what I need and then I leave. No victim remembers what happened to him if I don’t want him to remember.
    After I drank the man happily sinks to the ground. I lick the last drops of blood from my lips, before I kneel down in front of him.
    “You will not remember what happened.”, I say with my vampire voice. “You will not remember me.”
    And then I get up and walk away.
    I enter a saloon. A nice, old lady is cleaning up.
    “We’re closed!” But then she looks up and sees a woman had entered. “Oh dear!”, she says with pity.
    I can act perfectly if I have to. I smily shyly. “I’m sorry to disturb you.”
    “Oh, no, no, no, no. Come in!” The lady smiles. “You look like you could need some food and a place to sleep.”
    “No food. One room. The darkest you have. Closed windows. I won’t be disturbed until I leave next night.”, I say with my vampire eyes.
    “I think, I have the perfect room for you, my dear. Just follow me.”, the woman says and leads me, the lost girl again, upstairs.
    My room is tiny, but it has all I night. I pay the woman. “Thank you.”, I say.
    She smiley and goes away.
    I look after her for a few seconds. My mind is running.
    Who was that strange girl that saved my life? What did she give me? And what the hell is she?
    I close the door and the window. I lit a candle and sit down on my bad.
    “I have to gt her out of my mind!”, I tell myself. And then, for the few hours that are left of the night, I make a plan of how to go on.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.01.2009, 23:40


    wow amazing ending of this chapter :D

    it's perfect :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 18.01.2009, 00:51


    you think so...? :?


    Then start a new chapter! :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 18.01.2009, 23:50


    still thinking of something

    and than to think that it was a game of fun.. without preasure :P :P


    :lol: :lol: :lol:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 18.01.2009, 23:58


    yeah, I know... but.... aaaaah :roll: :roll: :roll:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 19.01.2009, 20:56


    Jessica had hoovered to the place she hadn't been since that horrific day.
    the day that her father was killed.

    as she walks closer to the spot where his body had been piereced and turned to ashes ,the memories came drifting up.

    it had been a dark night ,darker than usual.
    en-trapping the demon back to it's lair had taken it's tole on her father's brain

    a long time ago they had made a pact that if 1 of them would turn to the dark side ,the other would kill the person who had turned

    this was the day.

    after a long and hard battle between father & daughter she had him right where she wanted him.
    there was no escape ,not even room to move.
    tears escape her eyes as she pierces a silver stake through his lifeless heart.
    flames escape his body... she falls on her knees and cries harder.
    among her cries words of regret.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 19.01.2009, 21:05


    oh eddiefever. That's so sad! *big hug*
    Questions: Do we write in he/she-form or in I-form and what time do we use? Past or present? ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 20.01.2009, 15:04


    doesn't really matter. we both have a different style ,so just pick what's easiest for yourself. :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 20.01.2009, 20:39


    ok ;)

    I will add something on thursday. I'm so tired at the moment, that I can't concentrate. I have ideas, but I can't get the words together and if I write something I want you to understand it ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 21.01.2009, 21:22


    i had the same problem.
    i had a huge post in my mind to write ,but i was to tired to work it all out..
    so just left ti at a small part.
    rather a small & good piece ,than a huge piece that reads as a puzzle ,lol



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 27.01.2009, 21:27


    here you go, eddiefever!!! :D

    I woke up with a terrible pain in my chest.
    The demon was angry. And because of the bond I could feel his anger.
    I writhed with pain, my hands pressed on my heart, untill everything was over. Heavily breathing I finally got up and dressed.
    That was one of the disadvanteages of the bond. I could feel every strong feeling of the demon with pain, while he never felt anything of me. Unfair, I know.
    I grabbed my stuff and left the hotel.
    It was a cold night. It had rained the day before, so that the street was more like a mud-way than a street.
    I left the villiage and turned south. The way would be long. Especially because I had to travel by feet. But it was too dangerous for me to buy a horse. What should I do with a horse during the day?
    So I ran south.
    The nice thing about traveling is, that you always make new experience, even at an age of 200 years. The bad thing is, most of the time they mean trouble.
    I reached Southern City, also called White City, in the middle of the night.
    “A young Lady so alone in the night?”, asked the doorman.
    I smiled at him. If he knew what a Lady I was. “I can protect myself better than I look like, Sir.”, I replied.
    He opened the door for me. “Anyone else with you? A horse?” He looked out into the dark.
    “No.” I answered.
    The suddenly different sound in my voice made him turn around.

    I drank from his blood. More to feed the demon than to feed myself. I know, it’s horrible. It’s never a good idea to make such a deal with a demon. They’re always hungry. And if a vampire makes a deal with a demon that means he – or she in my case – needs blood every single night untill the deal is over.
    Southern City is the capital city and the biggest city in this country. Even a night the streets are always crowded. A paradise for vampires.
    But there is an unspoken rule among the vampires: Noone conqueres Southern City.
    It’s one of those territorial-vampire-instinct-things.
    I walked through the streets and enjoyed having so much fresh blood around me. So many strongly beating hearts.
    A vampire has to be careful not to get lost in their sounds.
    It was a long time ago I visited Southern City. The last time I left it I had a bunch of hunters in my neck. Trouble. A lot of trouble.
    And there are still many hunters in this city. They even have their own saloons and hotels and shops and so on.
    Sadly those are the best places to gather information.
    And the best of the best is a club named Bloodsavers.
    Horrible name, I know.
    Arrogant …. (I wont write that word down), those hunters.
    I walked through the streets towards the downtown of Southern City. Where you can meet the hunters.
    Isn’t it interessting, that hunters and vampires have spies on both sides? Doesn’t that show that we’re just normal human (well, not really human) beings?
    Anyway.
    At a special age you know some of those spies. On both sides.
    I don’t really care about spies as long as everyone leaves me alone. And the Son of the Devil. I’d definitaly kill everyone who killed him. That was my fight and I was the only one to fight him. I had the right to kill him.
    Oh, there was nothing more in the world I wanted more to kill this bastard who murdered my family so brutaly.
    And I finally had at least an direction to where he was.
    I already could feel the bare skin of his neck under my fingers.
    I shivered.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 27.01.2009, 21:52


    wow ,amazing :big_applaus

    "please continue" ,she asks with pleeding eyes ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 27.01.2009, 21:53


    lol ok. Later. I just have to talk to some friends at first and then I will go on ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 27.01.2009, 21:55


    k ,cool.
    have fun chatting :P



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 27.01.2009, 21:55


    thx I do ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 27.01.2009, 22:23


    Help . . .



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 27.01.2009, 22:31


    lol why? ;) how can I help you?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 27.01.2009, 22:53


    I show Blood Ties at sunday, and now I read your storry.

    Nightmare in my dreams.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 27.01.2009, 23:46


    :big_rofl poor fellaw.
    *hugs*
    but it ain't that scary.
    Idirl and I are sued to these things ,aren't we Antje ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 28.01.2009, 12:02


    My dream last night: ... and my wakeup today:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 28.01.2009, 16:36


    aaww :big_knuddel
    here ya go ,hands Frogsman a cup of coffee :big_kaffee
    hopefully that'll cheer ya up :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 28.01.2009, 20:28


    . . . Thank you eddiefever



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 28.01.2009, 21:12


    Poor Frogman ;)

    But there is really no need to be scared :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 28.01.2009, 22:10


    no.. it's all just fiction.
    it's fun to let your mind create things... as long as they don't turn into reality ;)

    wouldn't want to enocounter a real Vampire
    wel... that's not entirely true :oops:
    i would .. as long as he/she wouldn't Bite me or Fight me ;) :lol:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 29.01.2009, 00:13


    well, depends on the vampire I meet. If he's friendly and being a vampire is as cool as ot's described in the books I wouldn't mind him biting and even turning me. :roll:

    ps: sorry I didn't add anything to the story today.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 29.01.2009, 19:09


    I put garlic on my window :shock:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 29.01.2009, 19:55


    lol

    I don't know if that helps :roll:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 30.01.2009, 12:24


    Ok, I ask Van Helsing sdfew



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 30.01.2009, 14:31


    Garlic only helps with a vamps from a close region :P ;)

    so ti won't do you good on most Vamps :big_aetsch :lol:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 30.01.2009, 18:35


    OK, I ask my dream girlfriend Buffy ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 30.01.2009, 18:52


    Vampires aren't even that bad. At least not our vampires ;) They don't come to harm you.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 30.01.2009, 20:07


    true ,they are the RARE sweet kind ;) :D

    PS: frogman ,did you knwo that your g/f used to date my husband ,Angel(us) :?

    ( :lol: )



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 30.01.2009, 20:07


    Like Angel ?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 30.01.2009, 23:15


    Sorry you had to wait so long. Here's the next part ;)

    The City had changed. The Hunter-area didn’t look like a slum anymore. Good for the hunters, bad for the vampires, because it meant, that the hunters gathered more importance in the high society.
    And even worse for spies from the vampire side.
    I couldn’t find any.
    Usually a vampire can sense another vampire when he or she is close enough. (I still don’t get why I couldn’t sense that girl…) But here – nothing.
    I became more careful.
    This wasn’t the downtown I remembered from last time.
    The hunters had improved themselves. Definitaly.
    I took cover in a shadow when two hunters came towards me.
    Well, the hunters may have imporoved their surroundings, but the people still looked the same. Dirty.
    I could hear parts of their dialogue, but they had no information for me.
    But then suddenly one of them stopped.
    The other one looked at him.
    And then they both turned around.
    And they looked at me.
    They knew where I was.
    And what I was.
    They took their swords and came towards me.
    Swords???
    But I had no time to wonder. I had to stay alive.
    Although swords actually can’t kill a vampire (only if you chop off it’s head) they still hurt. And I had felt enough pain in the last nights.
    I grabbed the sword-arm of the hunter closer to me and used him as a shield. His partner’s sword ran right through him.
    Before he could scream in pain, I broke his neck.
    The other one was shocked for a second.
    The second I needed to grab him by his neck and pull him against the wall behind me, his feet hanging almost one feet above the ground.
    He drobbed his sword when he tried to get my hand of his neck.
    “How did you know I was there?”, I whispered angrily, being a vampire.
    The man couldn’t speak, but what he saw scared him almost to death, for there wasn’t only the vampire in my eyes anymore, but also the demon.
    This doesn’t mean my eyes turned from black to red or something like that. No. My look was just a lot more intense. Dangerous.
    Deals with demons have their good sides, too.
    “How did you know I was here!?”, I repeated and banged his head against the wall.
    I gave him a little air to speak.
    He was a young hunter. A scared hunter.
    An experienced hunter had never told me his secrets. But this one did.
    “The swords.”, he cried. “They’re magic.”
    I looked at the sword on the ground.
    “They tell us when a vampire is near. I don’t know how, but with them we can find the vampires.” Tears ran down his cheeks. “Please don’t kill me!”
    I smiled at him.
    He couldn’t scream, because I put my hand closer around his neck again.

    I didn’t kill the boy. Yeah, it was a boy. Maximum age 17, but I’d say he was around 15. Too young to hunt. And too young to die.
    I drank from hiw blood untill he feel unconscious. He wouldn’t be hunting for a few days.
    The young blood in my veins made me feel a lot better than in the last days.
    There is a huge difference in drinking blood from old and young people. It’s like the difference between old, warm and fresh, cold water.
    I picked up the sword carefully.
    Magic.
    Indeed this sword look unusual. But not so unusal they one would pay attention to it. And there were words written on it.
    I went back to my sleeping place. With that sword. I wanted to find out more about the magic the hunter used nowadays. Maybe they didn’t only bewitch their swords, but also had other new inventions.
    I’d go to the hunter-area next night again. Better prepared.
    The hunters weren’t the only ones able to use magic.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 03.02.2009, 21:10


    Hey, Frogman. Do you want to join the story? ;) Eddiefever wont be here for a while (she's busy) and I don't want to write it by myself. :roll:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 03.02.2009, 21:43


    Hi Idril !

    I have translate your story by google. :oops:
    My English is to bad.

    But years ago, at school, I write horror stories also like you.
    (Short stories like "Professor Zamorra" from Jason Dark) :shock:

    Today I'm more a fan from Science Fiction.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 03.02.2009, 21:53


    awww I could translate what you wrote :roll:

    And we're a fantasy story. I don't think it matters if you mis a bit of Science Fiction into it.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Anonymous - 03.02.2009, 22:10


    I look for my old stories next days



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 03.02.2009, 22:10


    well, somehow your stories have to fit in with this story if you want to take part in it ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 06.02.2009, 22:06


    yuppa to Frogman's post abotu Angel & to Idril's post as wel :lol:

    sorry for not comming on sooner ,but i've been extremely busy
    haven't even gotten time to write.
    just read your new piece idril ,and i'm loving it.. as usual :D

    i'll tyr to write something soon ,but if you can't wait than go ahead and write my piece ;)

    i'll just see the answer next time that i'm online :lol:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 06.02.2009, 23:17


    take your time ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.02.2009, 17:19


    eddiefever...? It's your turn :roll:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.02.2009, 17:37


    i know :lol:
    i just haven't felt so inspired to write on it.. so you go ahead :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 17.02.2009, 19:23


    nope, you =P We will wait ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 17.02.2009, 21:09


    oke ,i've written something.
    it's not perfect or to exiting :P ,but it's long and it could bring up a lot of info ...depending on the VAMPS moods ;)

    here goes:

    the following night Lynn returns to the Hunter's cafe
    prepaired with a spell that makes her undetected.. so it seemed.

    as she enters the cafe ,eveyrone stops what they are doing and stare at her.
    she.. unaware that she's detected... walsk forward to the bar.
    1 of the hunters calls her out : haven't seen your face around here. you here for pleasure or business?

    she looks at the hunter.. and feels something is off ,..like he spuspects
    (thinking ->)"playing along is the best way... at least as long as it stays like this"
    a little of both actually ,she says with a humble but radiant smile.
    Hunter: wrong answer !!
    as he says that him & the others attack her...

    she jumps 3 feet up ,grabs her sword out to slash them...

    as she 's almost back to the ground she hears "STOP!!!!"
    all the hunetrs freeze their motion ,yet Lynn doesn't

    1 inch before her sword slices a hunter ,she feels a wind flash
    "what was that" she thinks ,just as her sword gets stopped by something.. other than the hunter.

    it's the vampire from the night before.
    Lynn's sword is stuck in her hand.. both covered in blood.

    before Lynn can putt everything into place she hears the hunter that ordered the attack say : why'd you do that !!
    Jessica gazes at the hunter ,in which he replies by putting back his sword & ordering the others to do the same.

    Lynn looks from the hunter ,to the Vamp. than thinks "whatever"

    "i wouldn't do that if i were you" she hears in her mind
    Lynn drops detah in her track
    wwwwhhhhattt ,she says to herself.
    she looks at the vamp once again.
    who had her eyes on her this time
    Lynn: what is it with you !!!
    Lynn was sooo mad.
    she was sick of this stupid game of not knowing.

    it seemed like jessica hadn't heard her speak cause she slowly walked to the main stairway
    but she was wrong ,cause when she didn't follow as Jessica thought she would ,she heard a "wanna know ,than Follow!!"

    this made Lynn's blood boil even more... but she also knew that this Vamp might have saved her 'undead body'
    and this might be the only way to find out what was the deal with this .. this.. Stranger



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 19.02.2009, 22:29


    you used my character. Interessting ;) Give me a few more days to think about something good, because (sorry) you kinda ruined my plans :twisted: :roll: =P



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 19.02.2009, 22:54


    wel that's what you get when you don't obay me ;) :P (when i say that you can go)

    lol ,sorry though.
    it's never funw ehn a plan gets ruïned :?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 19.02.2009, 23:19


    no, it's ok. I can go on from here, don't worry. I just need to get my information somewhere else ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 24.02.2009, 22:48


    Phew ,i'm glad.

    wonder what & when you'll post it :P

    PS: how everything at school?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 24.02.2009, 23:22


    I'm a bit busy at the moment but as soon as everything cooled down a bit I will start posting again ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 25.02.2009, 16:42


    k sweety ,take your time :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 02.03.2009, 19:07


    I'm back and I will add something tomorrow :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 03.03.2009, 17:03


    Here it is:

    I grabbed my sword. No matter what the huntrs might think or what this othr vampire-witch might think, I wouldn’t go in there unarmed!
    Why did my invisblespell not work?, I asked herself, while she went up the stairs. My eyes were fixed on Jessicas back, but still I could feel and smell every movement in this saloon.
    Jessica entered one of the expensive rooms in the hotel above the saloon.
    “Nice.”, I said, having won my relaxed voice back. But inside I was still angry. Very angry. This girl was stronger than I thought.
    But she doesn’t have my experience. I can feel that she’s younger than me. She may know how to use magic better than me, but fight aren’t won by magic.
    “Please close the door.”, Jessica said with a cool voice. She sat down on a comfortable chair and gave me a sign to sit in front of her.
    “No, thanks. I remain standing.”
    “You wont need that sword.”, Jessica said.
    “Depends on the point of view.”
    “You can’t kill me with that sword.”
    “I don’t need a sword to kill you.”
    “Are you going to kill me?”
    I looked at her. I could feel her vampire under her surface. The vampire in me moved.
    It’s hard for two vampires to be so close to each other. As long as they can stay human they stay alive. But if the vampires should break loose for any reason sometimes only one comes out alive.
    But I could keep her vampire under control. 200 years of practise. This girl still had a lot to learn.
    “I don’t know. Do you think I should?”, I asked and played with the sword in her hands.
    “Last time we met you almost tried.”
    I raised an eyebrow.
    To an outstanding person Jessica looked relaxed, just like me. But I could feel that she wasn’t relaxed. She wasn’t scared either, because she knew she had surprised me already two times and saved my life once. She thought she had enough power to survive an attack from me.
    So she wasn’t scared, just careful. Very careful.
    But that didn’t stop me from provoking her. “Are you scared I could try again?”
    “I’m not scared!”
    I smiled. “Maybe…” I started walking ariund in the room, acting like I was looking at the furniture and different pieces of art in the room “… I should tell you something about me.” I had my back turned on her. That was almost like an offence, in human-world and in unhuman-world. Also it could stand for stupidity, but I knew exactly what she was doing behind my back. I would feel everything she wanted to do against me even before she even started.
    I raised my head from that little china statue and looked at her through the mirror.
    She raised her eyebrows. Still acting cool. But I could sense her anger about my behaviour.
    Well, this invitation wasn’t friendly either, so why should I behave nicely?
    “I never try to kill someone or something.” I look directly at her eyes. “Either I kill or I don’t. There is no trying.”
    Now she laughed. It was the nice laugh of a young woman. A laugh to seduce men. And a laugh of a person with no experience.
    “Yeah, right.”, she said. “You just had your hand around me throat ready to squeeze it untill I died or even ready to rip my head of.”
    I turned around, slowly. I didn’t feel provoked by what she had said. I almost laughed back at her, because she knew so little. “There is a differece between threatening and trying to kill.” I leaned against the little cupboard behind me.
    “You think so.”
    “I know so, my dear.”
    “Don’t call me ‘dear’! You have no right to call me that!”
    Oh, there I hit an sensitive point. Good to know.
    “Yeah, you’re right.”, I said. “I apologize.” I smiled.
    She didn’t look happy, but not accepting the apology had been a real offence. So she just nodded.
    Jessica knew she had lost the leading role in this conversation already when I had entered the room. I could feel her anger. This wasn’t how she had imagined our conversation.
    But I didn’t want to give her a reason to attack me. I wanted information. So I cooled myself down again.
    I could see the reaction in the girl’s eyes, even when it was for less than a second. She still wasn’t scared, only careful. But now she was also unsure about what I was going to do next because that danger that sourrounded me disappeared. But she got herself under control again.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 03.03.2009, 23:59


    loved it :D

    here's my new piece


    jessica wasn't sure if she would give her information after such a stupidious act.
    this girl really thought that she was smart.
    she even thougth that Jessica was younger than her ,less experienced.
    and even worse..she thougth that Jessica was provoked by her actions.

    that was the exact opposite.

    oke ,she was between 10-20 years younger than her ,but that's it.
    as for experience...she had seen more deaths than most vamps and even demons had seen.
    cause of her choices in life she had it tougher than most Vamps.
    not only was she hunted by most humans.. she was hunted by Vampires as well.
    that was the price she paid for having a true soul ...something she never have a choice in.

    and provokations ,HA.. she wasn't provoked.. it were the girls thougth that made Jessica flich.
    cause this girl thought she was all that.
    she might be a little older ,but they were equal in all the above.

    Jessica overthought her plans.
    "should i still tell her what i really am... who i truly am."

    since she hadn't decided yet she decided to putt the woman at ease.

    "There is no need for you to be on full alert. it's oke.. but not nessecary"
    "but like a true Vamp you probebly see this as a reason to be even more on your toes"

    and she was right.
    it made Lynn even more suspicious.

    your soo worked up that you don't even see that i don't have any intrests in killing you..or harm you for that mather"
    "to bad that you can't see the possibilities.

    Lynn: what possibilities?
    Lynn to herself: what's she frikkn' talking about.
    what are her plans?

    Lynn: tell me why the h3!! did you bring me here.. speak!!

    Jessica: 1st you should relax. why don't you trust me?

    Lynn: why should i? cause you saved my life? heck i'm already death so that's not a blessing ,lol

    Lynn headed towards to door. "i'm outta hear ,you've waisted enough of my time"

    Jessica: Suit yourself ,but be aware that i don't control every hunter in this city.

    Lynn shrugged her shoulders and walked out the door without looking back.
    thinking that it was a threat

    Jessica whispered: "be careful" not really wanting Lynn to hear it. with she didn't.
    but as Lynn walked out of her place something bedazzled her.
    she would have sworn that she felt a worrying feeling when she left.

    "stop thinging about it.. focus on your surroundings or your dog food" she said to herself and went on with her business

    PS: sorry that i couldn't give more past info.. wanted to but your story made it a bit odd to give Lynn so much when she wasn't able to be respectfull towards Jessica :lol: this sounds like a soap opera

    rofl



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 04.03.2009, 11:31


    well, would you expect Lynn to be totally respectful after such a "surprise" ;) And she never wanted to really offend Jessica, just tease her a bit to see how far she can go, where she can find weak spots. But it's still teasing her that she doesn't know what it is with Jessica :roll:

    I will add something new in a few minutes (or maybe half an hour, I don't know how long I need to write a new piece, but I will definitaly add something today :twisted: )



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 04.03.2009, 12:15


    It's a little long, I'm sorry :roll: But have fun.


    I left the room and walked down the stairs back to the saloon. The hunters there fell quiet.
    The grib around my sword tightened, but for the rest I looked totally cool. For a second I even thought about ordering a drink.
    But no, that wouldn’t be a too good idea.
    It’s just that I still didn’t have the information I needed.
    That damned girl. Somehow she showed up everywhere I was. At first in the ruins of the villiae and now here. Was she followig me?
    No, can’t be. Why should she? We don’t even know each other.
    She had control over the hunters. Or at least most of them.
    Why? Why did a vampire control vampire hunters?
    Did she make those swords?
    I was mad. She totally ruined my plans for this night.

    I left the saloon without further problems. No hunter tried to stop me, but their looks told me how much they wanted to.
    Some things had definitaly changed here in the past years.
    A soft rain had started while I had been in the house.
    On my way back to my hotel I gathered all the information I had about that girl.

    She knew how to make some kind of … whatever… to feed a vampire if no blood was available. Could that mean she didn’t want to drink real blood?

    She thought every vampire killed when he needed blood. Who the hell as her teacher? Where did she learn about her race? How the hell did she survive those years of her lifetime when she knew so little about vampires? Why did she hate them so much?

    She wasn’t evil, but she wasn’t an angel either. The demon in me had reacted to both. But she definitaly knew how to use magic. I could feel it. Not in a evil way and she wasn’t a magican either.

    She controlled the hunters. How did she get control over them and how dies she keep them? Did she have something to do with those swords? Did she help making them or even make them herself?

    And why did she stop me from gathering information? Why was she here? Why had she been by the ruins anyway? Why did she help me and not kill me to take over my territory, like every other vampire had done?

    So many questions and almost no answers.
    This girl wasn’t a normal vampire.
    So was she really weaker than me? I knew she thought she was at least equal in every way to me and maybe the age difference wasn’t as big as I thought, something between 10 and 50 years, and maybe she knew some tricks I didn’t know, but I knew that she wasn’t stronger than me.
    When you turn vampire and survive a few years you develop a sense for strength in other creatures. And it doesn’t matter what kind of creature it it. Noone, really noone, can hide his or her strength in front of a sensible vampire. And I was very sensible. I already had had a talent for that when I was still human. I remembered how my father used me when he and the others went hunting. They needed me to tell them how strong the vampire was they were hunting.
    I pushed the memories far away.
    What’s important is that being turned into a vampire made my sense for other’s strength even more sensitive.
    When I came back to my hotel I drank from a young woman and went back to my room then. Morning was still far away, but I packed my bags and layed down to sleep in full clothes.
    I started to meditate. For what I wanted to do next night I needed full concentration.

    The next night came. I was still angry, but I had myself under full control. I drank from three more people. Two strong young man and an old magican. If you turn vampire you soon realise that blood has might. And you can use this might to make yourself stronger. So drinking magican’s blood didn’t give me any magical powers. I didn’t even want powers like that, but magicans blood had more power. I hypnotised a young hunter at the dge of the hunting area. I took his sword and gave him a message for the girl.
    “Tell her: I don’t know who you are and what you are, but leave me alone until I finished my business. We can talk afterwards. You made me courious.”
    The boy nodded.
    I sent him away.
    He would deliver the message and he would remember me.
    I smiled.
    Then I searched for a quiet place. I found it in an old and empty house.
    I closed my eyes, imagined what I had to imagine, concentrated and then … I disappeared. Noone would be able to follow my traces, because there were no traces. Not even the mightiest magican could find me, not even a demon. Only if they knew where I wanted to go. And noone did so. Jessica maybe knew my final destination, but it was impossible to travel there in one night. So she knew I would be somewhere else going south, but she couldn’t know or guess where, because from now on I wouldn’t leave any traces.
    As long as I could avoid them.
    My way south would lead me trough different vampire territories. Of course I wanted to avoid meeting other vampires, I was even able to hide myself in a way that no other vampire would be able to find me, but trying to avoid doesn’t mean I wont see any.
    But it still filled me with some kind of happiness, that Jessica wouldn’t be able to follow me now for some time. Sooner or later she would find me, but only if I left traces for her.

    And where did I get her name from? She never told me her name and so did noone else. Why did I knew her name?
    If I knew her name she probably also knew my name.
    Could be bad.
    Names have power.
    But even with my name she wouldn’t be able to find me. You can’t find something that has disappeared, only if you know it’s destination and Jessica only knew my final destination.
    Did she also know what I was going to find there?
    Anyway. I would worry about that when the time for worrying came. Before that there were other things to worry about.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 04.03.2009, 13:43


    ooh wow this is amazing !!
    i'm so exited ,hehe

    can't make a story now ,as i'm about to leave in 5 minutes.
    didn't think you'd have a piece up already :lol:

    so hopefully i'll be able to come online this evening :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 04.03.2009, 17:51


    well, I'm fast ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 05.03.2009, 00:07


    1st of i wan't to apoligise for the fact that this next piece is ooh soooooo long !!
    i feel so ashamed :oops: :oops:
    but i finally was able to write 1 of the flashbacks :lol:
    which give a bit more info about Jessica.

    and since i'm positive that you will start a new chapter (since Lynn wasn't going to worry about Jess etc.) i had to putt it all in one ,cause it's still the same scene. (hope i still make sence)
    anywyas ,gotta go now.
    it's tiem for bed already
    (been writing for 1+half hour straight :lol: :oops:)

    back at the Hunters café

    Jessicathinking to herself:
    *sigh* how can i help someone who doesn't want any help?
    and now she used 1 of her vanishign spells. aarrg how frustrating.
    but i have to admit *smirking of pride* ,only a few ppl can use the spell she used.
    hhmm... i could use my spiritual sences ,but what's the point.
    she doesn't want to be found. if she finds out that i tracked her than the little trust she has vanishes along with her
    it'll only cost me in the end.
    i need her to trust me... i can't do this without her and neither can she.

    isn't there anything i can do for now.. think..think..
    a shiver comes upon her ...a memory glimmers through her mind...
    No ,not that ..anything but that. ; she says to herself.
    tears falling from her eyes as the memory gets stronger.
    "we need to face it" she hears in the back of her mind.
    she knew who the voice was. it was her teacher. the man who turned out to be her father.
    it was a shimmer of the memory she had been trying to block forever.
    now the time had come to meet her greatest fear ... her possible destiny.


    *flashback*

    as she lets herself go ,the memory gets stronger.
    it's midnight ,a full moon lights the sky.
    the streets are cold & almost empty.
    "tonight's the night ,Jess. tonight we'll see if it's enough."
    "Promiss me you won't come" *Jessica looks away ,pretending not to hear her fathers plee*
    "Look at me Jess ,you Have To promiss."
    with a lump in her troath she softly agrees.
    "that's a good girl ,now go to the safehouse and wait for me there. you know what to do right?"
    "i do" ; Jessica replied
    "oke ,now go. and remember No Mercy!!"
    Jessica nods at her dad than turned away.
    as she walks away from him she feels the person they'd been waiting for come closer.... and closer.
    her body starts shaking from the powers this person had. "ooh God ,he's soo strong.. he'll never make it (her dad)"
    she says in herself.
    she just couldn't walk away from this fight. she had to stay.
    so she goes to a secure place where both 'men' can't see her.
    and watches the fight.

    as the fight gets more intens she sees soemthing she'd never seen her father do before.
    he jumps the demon and rips his flesh .. wel of the humon he had taken over..
    he bites ,eats ,drinks.
    the more he drinks the violent he becomes.
    "what is he doing" ;she thinks ,while her eyes endured the horrific scene.
    as her father takes control of the demon ,she decides to get closer.
    cause eventhough he's winning ,he'll probebly won't be able to walk when it's over with.
    just as she's 10 feeth from the scene she hears the enchantment.. the spell of binding & closure.
    but there wasn't much strength left in her fathers body.. his voice was getting weaker.
    so she yells the spell as loud and strong as posisble.
    her father looks her way and screams: "NO!!! what are you doing!!! Leave... NOW!!!
    but she doesn't listen. she couldn't stop chanting. her father stared at her for a second.
    proud ,for his little girl was saving his behind. he looked back in the demons direction and chants along with his daughter.

    after a few minutes she heard the demon cry in torment.
    it was working.. it's almost done.
    as the demon gets pulled back to the place it should have stayed ,Jessica falls on her knees
    she's beat. she wasn't sure if she could walk back ,but that didn't matter.
    what mattered is that they did it. they defeted the demon. ...together.
    she glanched at her father. both smiling at each other.
    she could feel his pride and love.
    "you did good" he spoke just before a scream escaped his mouth
    "what is it? what's going on"
    her father used all he had to look at her and said: Leave baby ,Please !!
    but his begging had only made her not wanting to leave.
    there was something seriously wrong!!

    No ,i'm staying ,you can't change my mind on this one
    her father: bbuubuutt.. *AAHHH* his body started to twitch & spasm.
    you ain't turning oke.. you just can't!! ; Jessica screamed through her tears.
    her their biggest fear became reality.
    his blood at that of the demon were mixing.
    if it succeeded it's purpose than the world would never be safe again.
    You know what to do. Do it!!
    Jessica just looked at him in total shock.
    KILL ME !!!
    his screaming had gotten her out of the shock.
    bbb ... I Can't !!
    as his voice changes: You... *uhhh* ha..*uuh* ..ve to.
    the sound of his new voice made her body tremble.
    she knew she had to obay. it had been their pact. she knew upfront that this could happen ,and she had pomissed to stay true to the pact.

    as her father still crunches from pain she sat back down on her knees. next to him.
    she lifts up her sword.
    ii..iii.. *tears fall escape her eye .. like a rainstorm.
    he locks eyes with her and whispers through thoughts pleedingly: Do it..
    doubt crossed her mind. what if he was able to lock the demon part.
    she gets her head back when she feels a hand on her hand.
    it was her dad. she looked at him as he lets out another scream.
    this time it was more intense. it was almost done.
    tears run down her fathers cheeks. she had never seen him cry in all those years. not even when he spoke about her mother.
    he looks at her for the last time and sees that she finally had made peace with the situation.
    he nodded his head. the sword goes down.
    her father didn't even scream.. he didn't want to make it harder for her than it already was.

    *end of flashback*


    Jessica is sitting in the same position as she did when she killed her father.
    tears were still rolling from her eyes.
    she dries her eyes & takes a deep breath.

    she knew what she had to do to be prepaired. she had to gain power. she had to transform.


    *downstairs*

    "what was that all about" ; the hunters spoke to each other.
    "she's never let one go before... why this one? why now?"

    Head Hunter: i don't know guys ,but i'm sure as h3!! going to find out

    the head hunter named David Brooks ,also known as Rogue , went upstairs to get answers.
    and he was pi$$ed.
    without even thinking he trew the big wooden door open that stood between him & Jessica.
    not expecting the sight he saw than...

    Jessica floathing above the floor ,flying almost. while odd words came out of her mouth.
    a mouth that was covered in..... Blood!!
    he had never seen her use her Vampire powers before. nor the fact that she drank blood.
    he was tranquilized by the sight... or was it Jessica??
    fear took a hold of him as he witnissed green energy come out of Jessica's hands
    he couldn't speak!! ,he couldn't scream!!
    Rogue thinking: what's going on!!! what's happening here? Jessica ,Jessica?!?

    all his inner screaming got Jessica's attention.
    finally she was out of her trance.
    she saw the evidence of her beginning transformation.
    she was hoovering!! something she couldn't do before. not without a spell.
    just as she realises that she feels her power fade.. and falsl to the ground
    Rogue wasn't frozen anymore either.
    Jessica crawls to a sitting possision to get her body to calm down.
    when she remembers how she had gotten back. Rogue!!
    she looks into the direction of the door. where Rogue was still standing.
    eventhough he wasn't under her powers anymore ,he was still frozen.. from shock.
    quickly she whipes the blood from her mouth. than calls his name.
    Rogue... Rogue are you oke ;she says as she crawls closer.
    she was still to weak to walk.
    when she reached her goal she tucks on his pants and calls his name again.
    he looks at her with a fear that she knew all to well.
    it was the same fear as all her past victims had had.
    Jessica wasn't always a Vampire who cared.
    when she was in her teens her fathers blend couldn't satisfy her body's needs
    see ,when a Vamp like her has lived for a decade their body starts changing to a higher being.
    but it needs fresh blood to do so.. which is exactly what she had been doing before Rogue had interrupted her

    Rogue was still at lost for words while his entire body was trembling.
    she knew he wasn't in a position to understand it ,so she called 1 of the hunters to bring him to his house
    "be sure to tell him that i'll explain everything once he's ready"



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 05.03.2009, 10:15


    You don't have to apologize for it's length! The longer the better! :D And I love it!

    I will add something right away, just need to write it ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 05.03.2009, 11:45


    @ eddiefever I wrote you a PM with some info and questions ;)

    And now have fun reading!


    The problem about disappearing at one place and appearing again at another place is that you have to know how this place looks like. Not exactly, but if you imagine a house and this house doesn’t exist anymore you wont appear in the ruins, you will be lost in time and space forever. So there is a great danger about this way of traveling.
    Luckily I had a friend I could count on.
    At least I hoped he was still my friend. We had had some kind of love-relationship (we weren’t really in love with each other but … well… use your imagination) and one day I just left him. I had my reasons, but I never told him.
    I appeared right in his bedroom.
    I heard a woman scream.
    I was weak. Disappearing and traveling was very exhausting. But I still was able to see what was going on in this room.
    Phileas was sharing his bed with this woman.
    The pain of envy surprised me.
    “Lynn!”, he shouted, when he recognised me. He jumped out of his bed, not caring about his nudity. If you have an almost perfect body you don’t have to be ashamed for it.
    The woman was still screaming, crwaling backwards and trying to protect herself with that thin blanket. She didn’t dare to run away, because I was between her and the door.
    Stupid girl. In my position at this moment I wasn’t even able to to harm an insect. How could I harm her?
    But what did humans know about vampires that was true? For them we were just killingmachines.
    Did she even know that I was a vampire? She couldn’t see me teeth from here and as long as I didn’t turn I looked just as human as she did.
    Only better.
    A lot better.
    Phileas kneeled down beside me.
    “Lynn.”, he said. Did I hear worry in his voice?
    It made my heart beat faster.
    Damn, I didn’t know that I still had feelings for him after so many years.
    “You haven’t changed, I see.” I smiled at him. It was a weak smile. “Still busy with making the women happy.”
    “You haven’t changed either.”, he said. But his voice wasn’t friendly anymore.
    So he still was angry that I left him without an explanation.
    “From where?”, he asked while he helped me into a sitting position.
    I was shivering.
    “Southern City.”
    “Are you CRAZY???”
    Slowly all my senses came back to me. And so the hunger did. I tried to control it, but Phileas neck was so close. I could almost see the pulse under his skin.
    He recognised my look.
    “You need blood.”
    I nodded.
    “You can have her blood.” He pointed at the girl in his bed.
    “WHAT?”, she her lookd said, but she wasn’t able to speak.
    I felt a little pain in my chest that he didn’t offer me his blood, but I didn’t really expect it. His blood was too valuable to be spilled in any way.
    I could feel my teeth. The hunger became stronger. It hurt.
    My eyes were fixed on the girl. But I was too weak to get up myself.
    I didn’t recognise how Phileas helped me up and almost carried me to the bed, how he hypnotised the girl for me not to run away from the moster that was coming towards her. He was holding me unter control so that I wouldn’t kill the girl.
    I drank from her blood. I was hungry. Really hungry. So hungry, that Phileas almost lost control over me and that I almost killed the girl.
    “LYNN!”, he shouted, but he couldn’t pull me back. My teeth were still in the girls neck and pulling me back just had had the same effect as if he had cut her head of with very sharp claws.
    I heard his voice like it was coming from far away. But I heard it. I started to panic. I lost control over the vampire in me. Trying to escape Jess this way had cost more power than I thought.
    I started a fight with myself.
    “Lynn.”, Phileas said in a softer voice. “You have to let go.”
    The vampire wanted to kill him, wanted to free himself from his hands, so that he could put his arms around his prey and drink from it until it was dead. And then drink from the other man’s blood. His blood was powerful. The sound if his heart was like drums in the vampire’s ears.
    Phileas had problems holding me. He was fighting with me, trying to hold me arms and me in a way so that only my mought was touching the girl. But in his voice you couldn’t hear the trouble he had.
    “Lynn.” He pulled one arm around me and started to touch my neck gently like he had done so many times when we still had been together. What I had liked somuch.
    He whispered sweet words into my ears and the more he helped me to remember that I was human and not a monster the more I won control back.
    With a scream I pushed myself away from the girl. I pushed so hard that Phileas and I flew both out of the bed.
    Also Phileas was the one falling onto the ground and easening my fall he didn’t let go of me, but continued to whisper into my ears, to tell me who I was and what I was not. He was holding me tight untill I stopped fighting and lied still.
    “It’s okay.”, he said when I started crying. “Everything is alright.”
    I was holding on to him until I was able to stop crying. I took a deep breath.
    “I’m alright.”, I said. My voice was still trembling. “The vampire is safe.”
    Carefully Phileas let go of me.
    “The girl?”, I asked. I didn’t dare to sit up and take a look at her. I didn’t dare to look at her blood. Already the smell of it and the sound of her weakly beating heard almost drowned out by the sound of Phileas heart made it hard for me to keep control over myself.
    It was a long time ago that I lost control over my vampire. And it had happened only once in my life before. Shortly after I had turned vampire.
    I could see the unspoken question in Phileas’ eyes. “Are you sure I can leave you alone?”
    I nodded and rolled up like a baby, still lying on the ground.
    Phileas got up and walked to the bed.
    “She’s still alive.”, he said.
    I knew that myself, but hearing it from his lips made me feel a lot better.
    “She wont die. You didn’t kill her.”
    Now I was almost happy again.
    Phileas healed her without a scar and hypnotised her.
    “You wont remember this lady. You wont remember the vampire, who drank from your blood. You will only remember the time we shared together this night and you will feel good. Get dressed and go home now.”
    The girl did as she was told.
    Phileas came back to me. I still could feel his power. He was mighty.
    “We better get you into another room.”, he said and picked me up. “It’s sunrise soon and you need to rest.”
    He carried me out of his room. My head was leaning against his shoulder. The soft sking of his shoulder.
    Phileas wasn’t a human being, but he wasn’t a vampire either. He was…. well. Actually even I after being together with him for almost 6 years – the longest time he had been with only one woman by the way – didn’t know exactly what he was. I only knew that he was powerful. The most powerful creature I had ever seen. He knew how to use magic, every kind of it, good magic and dark magic. He was a healer. He was a knight. He was probably the bestlooking man ever. He was a shapeshifter (his favourite animal was a white tiger). And he was a Prince. I didn’t know from which kingdom and who his parents were. He only had told me once that he was a prince, but he fell silent immideately afterwards and told me to forget what he had just said.
    And right now he was my anchor to humanity.
    He carried me into another bedroom and layed me down onto the big bed.
    “Stay here!”, I said with a sign of panic in my voice and held on to his hand before he could leave. “Please.”
    He sat down. “I wont go away.” He softly stroked the hair out of my face. “I just have to close the curtains or otherwise you will burn when the sun rises.”
    Slowly I let go of him. My eyes followed him while he was going through the room and closed the curatins in front of the two big windows.
    I didn’t want to be left alone and so I couldn’t help feeling like a little child. And I was happy when he came back to my bed. Still naked.
    How often had I seen him coming towards my bed wearing absolutely nothing but his bare skin.
    I could see the tattoos on his skin. He never told me what they meant and even after 200 years I hadn’t seen anything similar.
    “Your clothes…”, he said.
    They were covered by blood.
    “Shall I?” His voice had changed. It had become deeper.
    “Yes.”, I answered.
    He helped me to get the off and just threw them to the ground before he came into the bed and covered us both with a blanket.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 05.03.2009, 22:58


    loved your new piece :big_applaus

    just send ya a Pm back :P
    am awaiting you answer.. also i'm still not quite sure what to write next.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 06.03.2009, 11:45


    I answered! :D And please add something new fast! Maybe Jessica needs Philea's help because of Lynn? I don't know ;) Just add something, so that I can add even more, you know :roll:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 07.03.2009, 00:54


    i'll try to do that tomorrow :P



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 07.03.2009, 02:43


    sorry ,once i started i couldn't stop.
    and i should really get to bed ,cause i need to be up at 8 am

    here's the new piece and it's Long!! but it explains the whole backgroudn that we discussed.
    i hope you like it :D

    Jessica hadn't slept that well as she thought she would ,cause the start of the transformation has exhausted her.
    she had had barely enough strength to crawl to her bed. but she had made it.
    her body had been feeling odd. some spasm's here and there. but that wasn't what had awoken her so often.
    it was Rogue. she couldn't get the image of his eyes. the fear. she had never thought she would see that fear again.
    at least not by her doings.
    he had seen the blood. that was for curtain. should she let him live?
    she couldn't do anything right now. he would kill her in less than a minute.
    and if she killed him ,what would his clan do ... if they fould out ti was her.
    she couldn't affort to lose the few allies she had left.
    her pact had already weakend when she had protecting that girl. and nwo this.
    why. why did he freakin' come by. i explicitly told him i'd talk to him when i was the right time.
    oooh...*shugs* i can't kill him ,but how will he react?
    he won't understand.. would he? *aargg*
    why couldn't have it gone easy? everything's going wrong these days.
    1st dad and his secrets (angry smiley). the demon comming back. my transformation.
    and i still haven't figured out a way to let that girl know that i'm sincere.
    what if she won't help me? i have to find my brother. he's the only one who can help me when she won't.


    a few days before dad died he revealed some secrets he had kept hidden for so long.
    he told me a story about a Princess ,born in Egypt. her name was Midha.
    she had dedicated her life to her God's as a High priestess ,like all 1st daughters of Faraoh have done before her.
    it's tradition. this princess fell inlove with a man from Greece ,called Orpheus. who had been shipped to Egypt as a punishment for turning to the path of enlightentment.
    his clan thought it was funny to send him to the Land of Sunshine ,the Land of Light so the speak ,as punishment for his betrayle (sp)
    after months of traveling from city to city he arrived in Luxor. the city of the Human God ,The mighty Faraoh.
    he choose the most seclure places to eat & sleep. and kill for he was a nightwalker.
    2 weeks had past and the rumors were speading that a killer was in town. they didn't know who it was ,but it had killed a douzen of ppl in the last 2 weeks.
    so everyone in town was at guard. no one dared to go outside during the nights. for it seemed that the killings happend during that time.
    no one dared ,except the princess. for she had finally seesed her oportunity to explore the city without being caught ,now that everyone was so scared.
    why she wasn't scared? the gods would protect her she proclaimed. besides priests were known for their skills in Magic & Combat. they also held powers of their own ,given by Ra ,the SunGod.

    one night as Orpheus is in search for food ,which was getting harder by the day ,he came across the young princess.
    she was sitting under a tree at the square of the town. exploring the starts with her hazelcolored eyes.
    he wacthed her for hours ,until his hunger became to strong. he had to find food fast.
    for 1 second he thought of getting the princess ,but that would be to much of a risk. what if he couldn't control himself with her as with the others.
    if she died ,than the whole town would search for her killer. no he couldn't do that.
    as he was walking away from the square someone said: "so you finally give up"
    he turned around to see who said it. there was no one but him & the princess. but she couldn't have said it ,could she?
    he shook his head. he was about to turn away again when he heard a giggling laugh. he looked in the direction where the princess was sitting.
    she was staring straight back at him with a beautiful smile on her face. he was amazed that she had noticed him for he was a skilled hider.
    "you seem stunned?" ;she said. "uuhh well i am. i didn't think you'd see me"
    "i'm used to being follwed & observed" "so who send you ,my father?" "if so than your an odd choice ,cause your not Egyptian ,are you?!"
    "ooh no ,i'm not & i haven't even met your father."
    "than why are you hear ,crawling through the night? are you the killer we're all after?" she than said in a sceptic/ironic voice.
    "haha ,that's funny ,pirncess. no i'm not. i'm merly enjoying this lovely night."
    it wasn't answer she had expected. she had never met someone who enjoyed what was her passion. gazing at the stars.
    "it sure is beautiful. i never get enough of it"
    she signed for him to sit ,but he hessetated. he couldn't do this ,could he? *arg* frustration went through him ,but at the same time he was amazed by the sence of trust & calmth the princess had.
    he eventually sat next to her on the ground. they had watched the stars together until he couldn't hold himself any longer. he needed food.
    so he bit her. drank from her. ooh the taste of her blood was heavenly. her blood was strong & pure. he had never taste anything like it.
    he couldn't stop drinking. "i have to stop. Stop!! ;he screamed in his mind" he realised that he had let go of her just in time.
    he hynoticed her so she would forget all about it.

    days later they met again and the princess had a "deja vu" feeling. he drank from her again.
    this ritual continued for several nights in a row ,until the princess realised that she must have been under a spell ,for whenever see saw that man she felt inlove.
    yet she didn't know him. she casted a spell onto herself that would keep her from forgetting.
    and yes that night it happend again ,but this time he couldn't drink from her.
    for he had lost his heart to her and didn't want to damage her precious skin ,nor her brain.
    he found new victims to drink from so he could build a relationship with her.
    soo odd ,for he never thought he'd do that ever in his life as a nightwalker.
    but she had stolen his heart & there was nothing he could do about it ,but he had to tell her.. everything!!
    and so he did. at first she was shocked ,but she was so inlove that she figured that the Gods had brought him into her life.

    weeks past with secret meetings ,where they also made love.
    there wasn't any fear in becomming pregnant ,for a Vampire couldn't make children...unless on a special day ,with use of a ceremony.
    1 night they were spotted by one of the priests ,who had gone to the faraoh to squeel.
    the faraoh had gone balistic!!
    his daughter with a commoner. no normal man was good enough for his daughter.
    so he locked her up in her room. but that didn't keep Orpheus from seeing her. he just used his vampire powers to get to her.
    he couldn't do it often though ,cause it drained him to much.
    1 day during her lessons by the priests she heard them speak of a special day. a day of darkness.
    ths event would happen within 1 week.
    she ahd to tell Orpheus about it ,cause this was the day they could make a child.
    not only was it a token of their love. it was alos the only possibility for her father to agree to marriage between the two lovers

    the following night Midha tells Orpheus all about it. she even made a few of the arrangements that were needed for the ceremony.
    all she needed was his agreement and his seed.
    Orpheus wasn't sure ,but he didn't see any other option either ,cause he couldn't keep this up for to long.
    a few days later it was time. Orpheus had hide out one of the basements of the castle.
    from all the shouts and screams he knew the day had come ,so he went to his lover. together they performed the ritual and made love once again.
    soon after there was a knock on the door. it were the 2 highest priests ,who were send by the Faraoh ,for someone had seen Orpheus get in the room by using spells.
    so the King figured to play it save and send them ,cause they were a match to him.
    Orpheus was caught and send to a heavy guarded prison in the castle.
    after a few months Midha's body started to show her pregnancy and The Faraoh had called Orpheus with him to discuss the matter.
    they had agreed that Orpheus would be there when the child would be born ,but he would be banned from Egypt the day after
    when Midha heard of their agreement ,she secretly visited him. together they made a path that she would stay until their child was 20 years fo age.
    for that was the time his/her transformation was finished. Midha needed to know everything that was of importancy so she coudl help her offspring when the time would come.
    after those 20 years they would meet up in Paris (city of Love).. if Midha still loved him.

    all this happend. Midha got a baby boy named Phileas. he didn't get a Vampire transformation though. which was seen as a blessing to Midha.
    the Gods had protected him from the darkness ,so to speak. Midha did teach him all that seh knew of Orpheus ,Vampires & all her knowledge of the priesthood.
    when he turned 20 she left Egypt to meet up with her soulmate in Paris.
    in fury her father had banned her from Egypt as wel. and made sure that Phileas would never fallow his mothers example. he could never leave!!

    soon after the lovers met Midha became pregnant again ,but when she was 34 weeks agong she was attacked by a demon.
    Orpheus had fought the demon ,who wouldn't let go of his prey. when the demon was satisefied he fled the scene ,leaving a devestated Orheus behind
    Midha was sooked in blood ,from herself and from her attacker. her injuries were to seveer.
    so Orpheus waited for her to take her last breath ,than he had to do an untinkable act. he had to cutt the baby out of his soulmate.
    but he knew that she would have wanted the baby to live.
    it was a girl and he named her Jessica. a name that Midha always had liked.

    that's what Jessica learned from her father in 1 evening.
    it was so much info. she just couldn't handle it ,so she fled.
    she wanted to be left alone for a while. but soon she realised that if she had been in her fathers position she would have doen the same thing by keeping it all a secret.

    now she had a brother ,who was still alive eventhough he wasn't a vampire.
    Orpheus told her that Midha must have been a higher being. that thats'the reason why her blood was so different and also the reason why Phileas was still alive.
    just like her Phileas & her mother's blood ,Jessica's blood had been different as wel.
    she was a mixed blood like Phileas ,only her fathers Vampire blood had been the stronger one. but she also had Demon blood.
    the same blood as the demon that was in Lynn. that's why she knew it when the demon was called upon.
    for at the same time Lynnw as calling her. there wa a connection with her and the demon that would only fade when it was on lockdown.
    and that's what she wanted. to be free of the nightmares once again.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 07.03.2009, 14:12


    I love it!!! I will add my piece tonight. Or tomorrow. I don't know yet, it's a question of time :?

    Btw did you get my PMs?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 08.03.2009, 15:05


    yup i did.
    thx for making the borders :big_knuddel



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 09.03.2009, 11:43


    sorry you had to wait so long and that this piece is rather short :? I don't even like it very much.

    Against common thoughts we didn’t sleep with each other. But we enjoyed being so close again. I felt safe and I slept better than I had ever done in the last 23 years.
    When I woke up, Phileas was already awake.
    “Hey.”, I said and smiled at him.
    He smiled back.
    I layed my hand on his chest and felt his heartbeat. Not with hunger. I wasn’t hungry. But the sound made me feel good. Relaxed and safe.
    Phileas’ hand was gliding over my back.
    “I never thought you’d come back.”, he said.
    I couldn’t help my heart staring to beat faster. I could already see where this coversation would end. He wanted to know why I left him without any explanation 23 years ago.
    “Can we talk about that later?”, I asked without looking at him.
    His hand on my back stopped moving. “Of course we can. Everything you want.”
    “Phileas!”, I said angrily. “Stop doing that.”
    “What?” He looked at me, angry, too.
    “That.” I sat up. “Can’t we just enjoy the moment for a bit? Must we talk about what happened 23 years ago?”
    “I didn’t start talking about it.” Phileas didn’t look at me, but straight to the ceiling.
    “But you wanted to.”
    “You still owe me an explanation.”
    I didn’t reply to this.
    He looked at me. “Why did you leave?”
    I left the bed.
    “Where are my clothes?” I couldn’t see them anywhere.
    “They were full of blood. They had to be cleaned.” I sat up and looked at me. Suddenly I felt like a little girl again. I pulled my arm around me.
    “There is a dress lieing on that chair.” He bowed his eyes and pointed in the direction. His voice sounded tired.
    I looked in the direction. It was a white dress. It looked innocent and pure. And beautiful.
    “It should have your size.”, Phileas said suddenly from the door and then he left the room. I was alone there. With the dress. And tears in my eyes.
    I shouldn’t have come here. I should have thought about a better place to go to. Another way to escape.
    I fought my tears back. But now I was here. And I needed Phileas’ help.
    I got dressed. The dress fit perfectly. I looked at myself in the mirror. The last time I weared a dress was 23 years ago. The last time I actually felt female.
    I raised my chin. I wouldn’t let the memories defeat me!
    I left the room and started searching for Phileas.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 13.03.2009, 23:06


    sorry for letitng youw ait so long.
    i'be finally got some pieces done for the story ,but not the 1st part
    so i'm trying to work on that part now :)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 14.03.2009, 21:03


    Take your time. I'm pretty busy at the moment anyway, so I don't have much time to write something as an answer ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 22.03.2009, 13:05


    eddiefever...? Where are you? :?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 22.03.2009, 20:06


    sorry for being so late ,btu i had to study for an exam.
    still have a 2nd one to go through next wednesday ,so wish me luck :P

    here's a little piece of what i wrote. i do have some questions for you Idril so check your PM's if you haven't yet ;)


    Jessica decided to kep her prommiss and go by Rogue's place.
    she wanted to see how he was doing ,but also how he would react to her precense.

    she knocked on the door.
    as she waited she hear footsteps walking down the stairs.
    a few seconds later the door went open.
    when Rogue saw who the visitor was he tried to slam the door shut ,but Jessica's left foot intervined.
    "Go Away" Leave me alone ,you monster!!.
    it had been a long time since she heard that kind of phrase.
    it hurted her to hear it from someone she had been so close to ever since her pops died.
    "Rogue ,please. let me explain what's going on." her voice trembled as she spoke.

    that little tremble made Rogue look up at her. if he didn't know better ,he could have sworn that her eyes were moisty.
    he opend the door fully ,but with some unsureness if it was the right decission.
    Jessica nodded at him ,a as thank you for giving her the oportunity.

    she sat down at the closest seat there was.
    she hung her coat on the seiling of the railing of the seat.
    Rogue stood across the room. with his hands in his waist ,he waited for her to speak.
    Jessica didn't even know where to begin and the anger in Rogue's face made her even more insecure.
    she sighed as she thought of the importancy of her information. and his reaction to it.
    once he knew the story and he wouldn't support her ,she would be all alone.
    she had never been alone ,so she didn't know how she would be able to survive such a life.
    that thought made her shiver.

    Rogue cleared his troath ,as he observed her.
    he had enough of waiting.
    "So are you still going to talk or what"
    Jessica looked up at him. her eyes were filled with worry.
    *huh* she never thought that this would be so hard. but she had to convy in him.

    "what i'm about to tell you is 1 of the best kept secrets of my family.
    it is the only thing that could harm me. and it couldchange everything ,even distroy me.
    so don't think of this visit as something lightly."

    from the sound of Jess voice he knew that she was being serious. that made a shiver go through his flesh.
    what was she going to tell him?.

    Jess told him almost everything. except the existance of her brother Phileas.
    Rogue had sat in a chair and listened to every word she spoke.
    the parts of her parents death had made him cry a bit. while Jessica had been of stone.
    there wasn't much emotion coming from her ,for she was prepairing herself for what could possibly happen after she was finished.

    Rogue was shocked at the new info about Jessica's transformation & what she had to do for it.
    but he had come to realise that it was a necessity. or else Jessica hadn't done it.
    he had known her for to long and this "new" info about Flash is death (Flash was Orpheus nickname)
    it had made him realise that jessica didn't want to end the same way as her father did ,but she was ready if she did.
    cause she had made a pact with Rogue that IF the transformation failed. he & his men would kill her.
    but until that moment Rogue's men could not know the plan. until than it would be a secret between a Vampire & a Mortal.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 08.04.2009, 17:21


    hey eddifever... If you have a next part for you character then publish it... Somehow I can't get anything down on paper at the moment... It's not that I don't have ideas, but they just don't want to be written down :?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 08.04.2009, 19:37


    i haven't really putt anything down yet.
    was waiitng for you.
    maybe you could share your idea's so we keep it all synchronised ,lol
    or maybe it'll even help you write things down ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 08.04.2009, 20:31


    Yeah, maybe. I will send you a message later. I will take a long relaxing bath at first. ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 10.04.2009, 17:40


    ...ooh that sounds rather nice.
    i might follow your example ;) :lol:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 14.04.2009, 22:12


    I'm so sorry! Still haven't wirtten anything and at the moment I also have a timeproblem... But in two weeks all problems will be solved (hopefully) and I will add a new piece! I promise! ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 16.04.2009, 17:18


    that's cool sweety.
    just take your time.
    i know how it can be to wanna write soemthing down ,than to find out that it won't "stick on paper" so to speak ,lol

    *hugs*
    and i'm keeping my fingers crossed that everything will work out for ya :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 21.04.2009, 12:38


    Har! I'm back! :twisted: And I'm writing on a new piece, which I will post today or tomorrow (I'm at university at the moment, so I can't really write and add here =/) so I think I will post it tomorrow morning.... anyway. The waiting finally has an end!!!! :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 21.04.2009, 19:30


    yay!! ,sure can't wait to see it tomorrow :D



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 22.04.2009, 16:35


    Next part!!!! :D

    I found Phileas in his garden lieing on a stone under the moon. He wasn’t in his human form, but had transformed into a white tiger. He raised his head when he heard me coming.
    “It’s impossible not to be heard by you.” I said smiling when I sat down next to him. But behind my smile there was fear. Fear that he was still angry at me.
    Phileas layed his head down on his paws and continued looking somewhere else. I didn’t know what he was looking at, but it wasn’t important either.
    The white material of my dress was almost shining in the dark but when I put my arms around the tiger and hugged him you couldn’t see where the dress ended and the fur started.
    “I’m sorry.” I said recognising that I really was. “I didn’t mean to start a fight.”
    Phileas raised his head and looked at me with his light blue eyes. Why did you leave me? those eyes asked.
    I bowed my eyes. “I will tell you. I promis.”, I said with despair in my voice. “But not this night. Please give me more time.”
    He transformed back to human.
    “I can’t give you more time, Lynn.”, he said. He sat up and touched my face, pushing up my chin with a soft movement of his fingers so that I had to look directly in his eyes. “You left me without a word 23 years ago. And then you suddenly show up again. You haven’t even told me why you’re here. I don’t know what to think about it. I don’t know what to think about you.”
    I tried to look away, for what he said made me feel guilty, but I couldn’t. He wouldn’t let me.
    “You hurt me, Lynn. And I don’t know if you can imagine how much.”
    Tears came to my eyes. “I never ment to hurt you.”
    “I loved you, Lynn.” He let go of my chin.
    My heart started to beat faster.
    “But now… I don’t know anymore.” Phileas turned his back on my and continued to look at the moon. “I dream about you. I remember what we had and I imagine what we could have.”
    “Phileas…” I whispered.
    He turned to my again and closed my lips with his finger. “Hush.”
    I fell silent.
    “I can’t get you out of my head and now that you’re here and I can look at you again…” There was so much pain in his eyes. “I want you, Lynn. I want you to stay here with me forever. I want you to love me.”
    I wanted to say something but he closed my lips with a soft kiss. The softest kiss I ever got from anyone.
    “But I’m also scared, because I don’t know why you’re here and what you’re up to this time. Will you play with me again and leave me behing with a broken heart again?”
    “I never played with you!” I said crying. “And I never ment to break your heart. I love you.”
    “Then why did you leave me?”
    I put my hand on his hand. “Because I had no other choice.” I whispered. My voice trembeled and I almost wasn’t able to understand because my words were drowning in my tears. “You were the most powerful vampire hunter ever and I was bitten by the most vampire ever. But you didn’t kill me. You even stopped being a hunter. So what could I do when the king of the hunters came to your castle to visit you?”
    Phileas looked at me. “I don’t understand… why is this a reason to leave me?”
    I took a deep breath. “I was afraid he would kill you if he found me in your castle. The hunters know me because Angelo’s stupid spies told them about me. The price on my head is 3 millions.” I made a helpless gesture. “I couldn’t stay here with a bunch of hunters in your house.”
    He looked at me like he still hadn’t understand what I had just said.
    “Don’t you know what happens to hunters who help vampires? They kill them!” I let go of his hand. “And I know you’re powerful, I know you’re a knight and one of the best warriors ever, but even you had had no chance against the king, his magicans and a bunch of hunters. I didn’t want to be the reason for your death.”
    “That’s all? You were afraid that I couldn’t win a fight against some little bastards?”
    Nice. He was angry again. “Yes, I was!” I stood up. “Don’t be so full of yourself! You wont die from age and diseases but that doesn’t mean that you’re immortal! You can be killed!”
    I stood up, too, right in front of me. He was taller than me. Almost a headsize. So I had to look up at him while he could look down on me.
    “That’s why you left me without a word? That’s why you ignored the fact that I have places to hide? Ways to protect you? Noone will find you if I decide that you wont be found!”
    I couldn’t believe that he was so stupid. “How long have you been a hunter?” I didn’t let him answer my question. “Anyway, it wasn’t enough to make you realise how powerful the hunters are! I can’t believe that you’re so ignorant!”
    “Don’t talk to me like that!”
    “But it’s the truth! You – have – no – idea – about – hunters!”
    “Oh well. If you think yourself so omniscient then tell me what I don’t know yet.”
    How could he be so arrogant? I sat down on the stone again and started to tell him everything I learned about vampire hunters in my lifetime as a vampire.
    If you think vampire hunters were a crew of rough pirate-like, unorganised, drunken and stupid men you better should delete that image from your head. They are organised. Better organised than every army in every courntry in this world.
    The first vampire hunter was a woman whose family had been partly killed and partly transformed by vampires. He found the hunters and gave her hatred to them and she still is record-holder for killing the most vampires ever. She also was the first queen of the hunters. Over the years the hunters became more and more. And their sign was their hatred. They didn’t just kill the vampires, they slaughtered them. New kings came and also magicians started to join the hunters. It was their idea to hide the imagine of the strong hunters behind one of drunken bastards to make the vampires feel more secure and become more careless. It worked. At the moment a man is king of the hunters. He’s a relative of the first queen and just as brutal. He’s still young and everyone – even the vampires think – that he could become the new record-holder. His methods are more brutal than they had been before, because he likes to play with his victims. And he dislikes hunters who help a vampire even more than the vampires themselves. He himself is an army. He’s always fullarmed and trained in almost every kind of martial arts and also able to use other people’s magic. He isn’t a magician himself but some kind of magnet for magic powers. He gatheres magicians around him, always at least five but sometimes there are more than 20 magicians with him. He always has the best of the best around him. Noone alone has a chance against him.
    Remember what I told you about Phileas. How powerful he was. And then realise that even he couldn’t beat the king. Then you almost know how powerful the hunters are.
    Phileas waited till I had ended my lesson. Then he raised an eyebrow.
    “I knew that.”
    “And you still think you could…” I couldn’t believe that.
    He came towards me and pulled kme into his arms. I leaned against his naked chest.
    “There are some things you don’t know about me.”, he whispered.
    I put my arms around him.
    “But I think I understand your fear.” He kissed my fronthead.



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    eddiefever - 22.04.2009, 19:11


    aaww ,this was absolutely Brilliaint :big_applaus
    and so cute :D


    haven't got a clue though ,about what to write after this ,lol
    cause to me it doesn't seem finished..or is it just some kind of "cliffhanger" ,hehe



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 22.04.2009, 21:42


    Well, Lynn still has to tell him why she came back but I didn't want to make a part of only Lynn explaining her actions. I have to think for some action between it ;)



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    eddiefever - 23.04.2009, 13:46


    ooh ,it's like that hey :lol:
    keep it for all ages though :P



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 01.05.2009, 18:12


    I have some more ideas for a new part. Shall I add mine and give you a bit more time? Or do you have something "in production"? ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 01.05.2009, 19:48


    no hun.
    you don't have to wait for me.
    i haven't written anything yet ,cause your part didn't seem finsihed



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 01.05.2009, 20:40


    lol ok ;) Then I will finish it ;)



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    Idril - 25.07.2009, 18:49


    Sorry for being away so long. The next part is in "post-production" ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 25.07.2009, 23:09


    yay!!! i can't wait



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 30.07.2009, 00:39


    Finally the next part! (but I'm still not satisfied with it...)


    [Short summary of what happened till now: Lynn, a vampire, is seeking revenge for the killing of her family and friends 200 years ago. To achieve that she made a deal with a demon. That deal weakend her so much that she almost died, but she was saved by a young Lady called Jessica, also a vampire but raised to be a hunter and she also is some kind of magician (@ eddiefever I don’t really know how to describe her magical powers with a few words, but please correct me if I should be totally wrong with my description) and from there on there should be some kind of bond between Jessica and Lynn as well. They met again in a hunter saloon where Lynn found out that Jessica was leading this part of the hunter-mafia. To escape Jessica Lynn disappeared just to reappear at an old friend’s (and lover’s) house. The man is called Phileas. Noone actually knows what he his (he’s told Lynn so far that he’s one of the mightiest warriors ever, a shapeshifter (favourite animal is the white tiger), a magician knowing to use both kinds of magic, light and dark, a healer, immortal, a Prince and by the way probably the bestlooking man ever (Lynn’s point of view)). Even after 23 years Lynn and Phileas are still in love with each other. What both don’t know is that Jessica knows Phileas, because she is his sister. And at the moment she’s on her way to visit her brother – not knowing that Lynn would be there, because she lost track of her when Lyn disappeared – while Lynn and Phileas are still trying to cope with what has happened between them.

    Damn, I’m really able to keep it short hahahaha]

    “But I think I understand your fear.” He kissed my fronthead.
    I started to cry. Tears that had been there and never spilled for so long now came out. And all Phileas did, was to hold me and whisper sweet words in my ear.
    “I’m sorry.”, I cried. “I’m so sorry. I love you.”
    “I love you, too.”, he whispered and kissed my tears away. “I do.”
    It took me a while to stop crying. I tried a few times but the flood had started and it didn’t want to end untill the last drop was cried.
    Turning red and feeling ashamed for my childisch behaviour I wanted to turn away and dry my face, but Phileas wouldn’t let me.
    “Stay.”, he said with a deep, rough voice. “Let me do this.” And then he kissed me. And soon that soft kiss became a deep kiss, when the hunger of love came over us we had felt for so long now and which we hadn’t been able to feed. With a loud scratch my dress was ripped apart and we fell to the ground.

    The ground around us looked like after a small battle. Grass had been pressed flat to the ground, at some parts even ripped out. And in the middle of all this Phileas and I were lying holding each other.
    I took a look at my dress.
    “I fear this one can’t be rescued.”, I said, but there was no pity in my voice.
    Phileas followed my eyes and smiled a happy boys smile. “There are more.”
    I kissed his forehead. “It’s sunrise soon.”
    We stayed there for only a few minutes before we got up and went back into Phileas castle where the sun couldn’t hurt me. Phileas got me a drink – blood, but not his. I don’t know where he got it from, but that didn’t matter. It tasted good. When I finished my drink Philease held my hand with sudden seriousness.
    “Never leave me again, Lynn.”, he said. “Never.” And then he surprised me. “Become my wife.”
    Now this was a little problem. Not that I wasn’t happy about it and actually all I wanted to say was “yes”. But my lips stayed closed.
    His eyes became dark. “What is it?” His grip around my hand became tight, almost painful. “Is it another man?”
    “NO!”, I almost screamed. “No. I love you, Phileas. Only you.”
    “What is it then?”
    I took a deep breath. “Don’t get me wrong. You can’t believe how much I want to say “yes” and become your wife…”
    “Then where is the problem?”, he interrupted.
    “You remember how I became a vampire? You remember how Angelo Nicca, the Son of the Devil, killed all my family and friends? It’s his vault that our villiage and bloodline disappeared from every map and everybody’s memory.”
    “You want to hunt him down.”
    I nodded.
    “I will help you.”
    “That’s… so sweet of you, but you can’t.”
    “Why?”
    “I have to do it alone. That’s part of the deal.”
    “What deal?”
    I made him looked straight into my eyes. And then she saw it. He grabbed my arms and pulled me close to him, still staring in my eyes.
    “When you came back here I recognised there was something different about you. But I thought it had been the hunger. And then I was too… unconcentrate to pay more attention for it.” He shook me. “How could you be so stupid, Lynn? How could you make a deal with a demon?”
    “Because I had no other choice!”
    And again we were screaming at each other.
    “Angelo once made a deal with this very demon and failed to pay him. The demon wants him, just like I want him. The demon knew where he was, I didn’t, but I’m the one able to kill him.”
    ”Lynn…”
    “Do not interrupt me!”
    “But what you’re doing is suicide!”
    “I am already dead, don’t forget that!”
    “Yeah, but you will be totally dead when you try fighting Angelo alone!”
    “I’m not weak! I gained strength!”
    “But not enough!”
    “Oh yes!”
    “Oh no!”
    And in this moment again I wanted to hit him. Men. Always the old fashioned thining about women not being able to fight. But he should have been so much more updated after so many years.
    “You wont go alone!”
    “Oh yes, I will!”
    “No, you wont! And if it means that I have to tie me to you! You wont go alone!” At least he accepted that I wanted to go. But I had to go alone.
    “I will, Phileas, you know that.”
    “And leave me again?” He turned around, making a gesture of diespair. “Great!”
    “Now you’re being unfair! I don’t want to leave you!”
    “But you don’t want me to go with you either!”
    “Because then the deal would be ruined and I will lose track of Angelo again! Don’t you understand? This is the first chance in 200 years and probably the only one to get Angelo’s head! And I wont lose that chance!”
    Phileas had already opened his mouth for an answer, but at the same time somebody nocked against his entrance door.
    We looked at the door.
    “Who is this?”
    “Do you expect anyone?”
    We had no idea.
    “Whoever that is…. He or she is powerful. Very powerful.”, Phileas said. “And there’s also something else…”
    I couldn’t feel anything. That made me feel scared. After 200 years of always knowing what’s coming towards you it’s scaring if you suddenly feel nothing.
    Phileas grabbed a sword and went to the door to open it. I wanted to stop him.
    “Phileas…”, I whispered.
    He gave me a fast kiss and smiled.
    “Whatever is standing there behind that door is good at hiding it’s strength from you. But I’m still stronger.” And then he went to open the door.
    What I saw there, made my mouth stand open.
    “Jessica!”, I shouted.
    “You!”, she shouted.
    And then we both: “What are you doing here?”
    “Ahm…”, Phileas made, who was still a bit surprised to see this little Lady alone in front of his door hlonding so much power in her, “you know each other?”
    “Oh yeah.”, I made. And I didn’t sound friendly at all.
    Jessica tried a weak smile. “I hadn’t expect you here.” And then her look glided over our bodies. Back to our faces. I could see her face turn red when she understood what we had been doing just a few minutes ago. “I have something really important to talk about with you, both of you, but would you mind getting dressed at first?”



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    eddiefever - 31.07.2009, 22:14


    ooh wow :big_applaus
    i'm totally liking this one.

    hhmm.. now it's my turn.
    i'll try to make soemthing this weekend ,fi i have time.
    got plans on saterday after work we go straight to diner & a movie
    sunday we have a BBQ /Cook Out :D
    but i have vacation from than. (except Tuesday lol)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 31.07.2009, 22:41


    thank you :D

    Just take your time. I let you wait ages, so it would be just fair if you took your time, too ;)



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 03.08.2009, 22:26


    i have a HUGE part at the moment
    before i show it i'd like to apologise that Lynn seems weak at this piece ,but she isn't really. also Phileas ísn't infected by the demon cause he only feels the power. he hadn't seen ,heared & felt what the demon showed.
    man ,i'm already slipping info.

    i hope you'll like it though * i'm soo nervous now ,haha*
    it's been a whiole since my last story piece. it felt good to write though... really good :D :oops:

    PS: all the Italic in this piece is from Phileas POV


    the two women glared at each other once again.
    Phileas ,you were going to get me a dress. right ?! Lynn spoke.
    giving her lover an all-knowing look to "beat it for a moment"
    he gives her a confused look ,than turns to Jessica.
    "i would really like to know the story between the two of you & why your here ,
    but like you said it's best to change first so i'll be right back."
    he looked at Lynn one more time before he went out of the room.


    The tension was building.
    Lynn was getting really sick of this medling stranger
    She thought that she was finally was rid of this woman for a chance ,than she suddenly shows up. at her boyfriends doorstep none the less.!!
    She couldn't have followed her ,since Jessica had seemed as surprised as she did.

    Again ,what are you doing here? ; Lynn said to the woman who was now leaning against the fireplace.
    “Nice place you've got here”. ; Jessica spoke. Pretending not to hear the question that's been asked towards her.
    Lynn's frustration was building. Jessica felt it shiver through her entire being.
    It wasn't only the Vamp who was angry.
    the Demon inside her as wel.
    Jessica regained her posture ,although it hadn't been easy.

    In these few days that the demon was free he had only been so violent 2 times. Both times she was out cold.

    Flash Back
    The very fist time she was sleeping ,regaining strength after a rough battle which ended up a dusty enemy & a poisoned Jess.
    She had used a potion to heal dissarm the poison ,but it took a little while for her body to heal.
    As she was sleeping she had a vision of a place surrounded by woods. It also showed her Lynn freeing the demon.
    What Lynn didn't know was that ti was actually happening. Usually ti took a few hours or days even for a vision to come true.
    She transported there anyways ,just to be ready when it would happen. She could rest until than she had thought. Untill she had transfered to those surroundings. The feeling of the demon pressence was stronger than ever & she instantly knew it was happening. She had ran to the door and tried to stop Lynn ,but it had been to late.
    The great power of the freed demon had made Jessica knock out.
    Yet she had seen everything that the demon had showed Lynn.
    When Jessica had awoken she finally understood what these last 2 “visions” really had been.
    It was the link between her & the demon that caused this. She could sence & see his thoughts and feelings.
    After he had bonded with Lynn ,he & his new host had both been exhausted from the ritual. Which gave Jessica time to get as much strength back as she could. And take care of the enhabitated vampire. Cause 1 thing she had learned from her father was that she could not kill the body ,as she knew she hadn't been strong enough to lock the demon in at that moment.
    *end Flash Back*

    “i think it's best to wait for Phileas”
    the shock was visible on Lynn's face.
    She knew his name. And more important did Phileas know her as well?
    Suspision crawled in her mind. Jelousy. She hadn't felt that ever.
    Than it hit her like a rock !! it was the demon causing this hatred feeling.
    Her only weakness. Phileas. Could neck her if she let the demon take control.
    In her mind she screamed at the creature that enhabited her.
    She warned him to stop messing with her if he wanted the deal to be finished.
    She felt a cold & hollow feeling ,like the demon was laughing. Like he enjoyed her rage towards him with his entire being. For a moment she felt so lost. The demon took the change to show some of the horrors he did to previous hosts that hadn't kept their end of the deal.

    “Lynn ,Fight Him. Your stronger. You're the host. He's only a guest.”
    a hand held on to her arms. She had assumed that it was Phileas ,but she had mistaken.
    It was Jessica. “why are you helping me?“ the words barely pressed out off her.
    She hadn't even noticed that she could barely stand. Infact Jessica could hardly keep her up.
    Blurry as h3!! but she coulf finally see a bit.
    She saw that Jessica was on her knees ,using her body & what seemed like her last bit of strength. Both women's faces were moisty from tears & sweat.

    Phileas had observed the occurance.
    it took him all his willpower not to rush over to the woman he loved & help her.
    Somehow he had felt a connection between both ladies. He didn't know what it was.
    All he knew was that eventhough there something odd about this Jessica ,she was goodhearted.
    His thoughts were broken by a growl....


    “FIGHT!! YOU HEAR ME. !! Jessica shook Lynn's body

    she had seen everything that the demon had showed her hopefully allie

    “i can't” Jessica heared faintly

    if you don't do it now ,you'll never make it ; Jessica shouted as she looked straight into Lynn's eyes. She saw Lynn's soul & the power that was fighting her.
    At the same time in her mind she saw through his eyes as well.
    She saw herself fighitng along Lynn to suppress this evil.
    It satisfied him even more that he was weakning 2 women.

    he didn't know about his bond with Jessica ,but he could see the fear in her eyes when they had pierced into Lynn's. what is that !! ;he thought. He could hear a voice in Lynn's mind chanting bit it wasn't Lynn.


    Phileas neared towards both women. He didn't know if he could speak or touch either of them ,for it seemed like they were in some kind of trance.
    He had never seen anything like this. He did feel that the demon had gained mroe spiritual power ,which scared him to death.
    Just as he wanted to help Lynn , he felt another spiritual power sooo strong. It would make the demons power be nothing more than a grain.
    He shook it off himself. He reached out to grab his lovers hand when her body started moving. It went up.He glanced to the side & saw Jessica getting to his lvl. Still focussed on Lynn's eyes ,while her own were glowing.
    Now he was more confused than ever. Who was this blond stranger ,who's blue eyes were now glowing green !! than it hit him. it was her. the masive power .. it belonged to her.


    A few seconds went by. The binding spell that Jessica had been chanting wasn't working throught the mind. She had to say it out loud.

    ALMINA ,PORI GORGILANTIANTO , BEGHEM TWÔH CHEH MOURI HASHRALMA RITMÉNSOUNI MONO... INO... SALLCAR !!!


    the evil preasure was gone.

    Jessica gasped ; "Get her." Just before she fell to the ground.
    Phileas barely caugth them in time.
    He slowly kneeled down so the women would fall to the ground without getting hurt
    he called for a servant to help him carry them to sofa.
    he was holding Lynn.
    after a check up he realised that she was going to be alright
    he turned to his servant. "how's the lady doing."
    "she's be just fine. she just needs some rest."
    "thx ,you can go now."


    He hadn't realised what had happend untill he heard the spell.
    He had heard & practiced that spell a million times with his mother when he was a child.
    She had told him that only members of the RaRoya which creators were the high priest of Faraoh himself ,had knowledge of this chantment.
    So how did this woman know? Who thought her? more important Who was she!!
    for some reason when she casted the spell she reminded him of his mother.
    "aaww that's only cause my mom was the only woman he'd ever been with casting the spell. she couldn't be a high priestess" ; he told himself ,not knowing how wrong he was.

    the following night


    PS: i'm already apologising incase i ruined your plans :? lol



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 10.08.2009, 11:01


    next part. It's really really long and has not even half of what I actually wanted to put in it... :oops: :roll: But enjoy!

    I awoke lying on a bed. The curtains were closed, but it had happened in a rush, so that a small streak of sunlight touched the floor.
    I fell back on the pillows. I felt like she had fallen down a very high cliff. And the ground had been stone. With a lot of sharp rocks.
    I put a hand over her hurting eyes to protect them from the sunlight. I wasn’t in danger here where I was lying. That place the sun couldn’t reach. But leaving the room would be dangerous.
    My head hurt. I tried to remember what had happened and how I had come into this bed.
    Jessica.
    Jessica had been standing in front of Phileas door.
    Phileas. Jessica knew his name.
    What was this all about?
    I could again feel the envy in her.
    I remembered the demon suddenly go wild in me. The reason hadn’t been my envy.
    But what then?
    For it was day my mind needed a bit longer untill it recognised, that something was wrong. My eyes flung open. The demon. Something was wrong with the bond.
    I sat up, a hand on my chest.
    I could feel that the bond was still there. But weakily and covered by something else. It was like a thick fog in my mind.
    I tried to see through that fog, but it didn’t work.
    My breath became heavy when I tried it again and again. But the more I tried the harder it seemed to push me away.
    I groaned in pain.
    “All powerfull union of three, bind this shadow from it’s host”
    I tried to remember what had happened since Jessica had enetered the door and the demon gone wild.
    But it was so hard to do. Plus the sunlight and the daily tiredness. My eyes fell shut and it was difficult to open them again.
    Maybe I should just sleep till night, gain strength and then start to think.
    But I didn’t dare to.
    This damned Jessica was in this house, probably talking to Phileas in this moment. Alone.
    It was not that I feared Phileas could be hurt. I was sure he would finish Jessica, if she started to do something strange.
    ‘Which she probably already did with me.
    WTF has she done with me?
    And why hasn’t Phileas done anything to help me?
    I layed down again, covered myself completely with the blanket and turned away from the sun.
    “All powerfull union of three, bind this shadow from it’s host”
    This sentence crawled through my mind.
    The thing about spells is, if one was used on you, you wont recognise it as a spell, even if you remember the words. Because if you knew the spell that had been put on you it would be too easy to break it.
    But there were ways to help you remember.
    I gathered the facts in my head.

    First: Jessica had come. How did she find me? What does she want from me?
    Second: The demon went wild. Why? It had never happened in this way before. I had almost lost control – if this Jessica ****** had given me more time I had won the control back.
    Third: The bond with the demon is somehow affected by something.
    Fourth: Jessica surely did this to me. What has she done?
    Fifth: Why didn’t Phileas help me?
    Sixth: I hate Jessica.

    And how much I hated her.

    Next I gathered all I knew about Jessica.

    First: She was a witch.
    Second: She was a vampire, too – as if witch alone hadn’t been bad enough, no, this ***** must be immortal, too! I’m so lucky.
    Third: She somehow found me wherever I went. How did she trace me to Phileas btw? I knew I had left no traces.
    Fourth: She knew Phileas’ name. Why?
    Fifth: She wanted something from me. Help? Pah! Never!
    Sixth: She as a vampire was leader of a bunch of vampire-hunters. Those ******* **** ** *******! Why can’t they kill a vampire when he’s standing right in front of them? Not that I wanted them to kill me when I stood in front of them but ****!!!! I wouldn’t mind if the killed this **** ******* ***** ** **** Jessica! But no, they even let her give them magic protection in form of some wicked swords!
    Seventh: I hated Jessica.

    “All powerfull union of three, bind this shadow from it’s host”
    WTF was this supposed to mean?
    I really wanted to rip something apart. To kill something. Best a hunter that had pissed me off.
    Or Jessica.
    Damn it.
    I needed blood.
    And sleep.
    And more blood.
    I pulled my knees around my chest and tried to keep the hunger small.
    I felt like a squeezed orange. In my mind I could see how my skin started to shrink.
    But at least the hunger kept me awake and I could go one thinking, allthough everything had some kind of red shimmer to it. A blood red shimmer.
    How much I’d love to bite Jessica’s neck in this moment.
    But her blood probably tasted bad.
    That’s why vampires only drink from each other in cases of emergency. Vampire blood just tasted disgusting.
    I turned around again. I pushed the blanket away. The sunlight hurt my eyes, but I didn’t close them. I was hungry. Really hungry. But this small streak of sunlight, not even a cm, was like a thick wall.
    Not impossible to break, of course, but even with a blanket over my head I would get damadged.
    And I hate being burned.
    But I was so hungry.
    The image of a little child that wants it’s sweets, which sadly lie unreacheble high on a cupboard came to my mind.
    I couldn’t help smiling.
    The child would get itself a chair and if this chair wouldn’t be high enough, the child would get a table and put the chair on the table.
    Only that chairs and tables wouldn’t help me to go through the sunlight.
    I sighed.
    I missed the sunlight. Long walks in daylight.
    But night had always been a big part on my life and now it was an even bigger one.
    I had never made a long relaxing walk through sunlight.
    Of course I had made walk through sunlight, but they were meant o get from A to B and never relaxing.
    All in all I could not say that I had the best childhood. I had useful talents and so I had been on my first vampirehunt at the age of four. But as much as my parents might have used – maybe even abused me – I knew they loved me.
    And now they were dead.
    I squinted the tears away.
    This was no time for tears. This was a time to make plans. Plans how to repair the bond, how to get rid of Jessica (again, damn, how much I hated her!) and how to find Angelo Nicca and finally kill him.
    So I got up and walked around in the shadows of the room.
    At first I wanted to ask Phileas for help. But I hated to ask someone for help.
    I remembered Phileas’ big library. Maybe I would find help there.
    “All powerfull union of three, bind this shadow from it’s host”
    I got dressed. Phileas had put some clothes on the chair next to my bed. Luckily no dress, but my usual travel-outfit. Black trousers, a black shirt and my black boots. Plus my bag with all my things.
    I opened the bag to see if something was missing – how knew if this Jessica ***** had not looked into it, too? – but everything was still there. The book, the broken candle, the knife, the map. Under the bag there lay my daggers. I put them into my boots.
    Not that U really needed them, but sometimes it’s useful to have one. Or two, like in my case.
    I comed my hair and kept them close to my head with a hairgrip.
    Then I turned around to the sunlight again.

    First thing to do: Get through it without being burned too bad.
    Second thing to do: Find something to eat.
    Third thing to do: Go to the library and get help.

    If I could close the curtains…
    I looked for something, a long stick maybe, I could use to close them. But there was no stick. And I didn’t want to break Phileas’ furniture to get one.
    But otherwise… One leg of the chair would be enough…
    No. No, I wouldn’t do that.
    So I went on walking.
    The hunger became bigger.
    I felt like a tiger in a cage.
    Tiger.
    Phileas.
    I felt him coming.
    I stopped and waited.
    Just a few seconds later he opened the door. He looked surprised when he saw that I was awake.
    “I thought vampires sleep during daylight.”
    “We do, but we don’t have to.” My voice sounded tired. Great. “For a hunter you know surprisingly little about vampires.”
    He smiled. “It was enough to kill them and stay alive myself.” He closed the door behind him. “But I just wanted to see if you’re allright.”
    I smiled back at him. He was wirroed about me, I loved this man.
    “I’m allright. But I would be even better if you could close those curtains.”
    Phileas recognised the sunlight. “Oh!” He hurried and closed them.
    “Thank you.” I felt immideately better.
    “Shouldn’t you be sleeping?” Phileas aksed and came towards me.
    I suddenly realised I was too tired to move anymore. I just wanted to lay down and sleep for the rest of the day.
    “Actually, yeah.”
    Phileas pulled me into his arms. “And why aren’t you sleeping then?”
    I put my arms around him. “Because of this Jessica girl.” I looked into his face. “Where is she btw?”
    “Sleeping. Just like you should be, too.”
    I rolled my eyes. “And what have you been dping after I…” I didn’t want to say ‘lost control’ because it wasn’t true. “…after Jessica did whatever she did with me?”, I said instead.
    “I took you into your bed and then brought Jessica into another bed. She fell unconscious, too.”
    “I was unconsicous?”
    Phileas nodded. “You looked like you were dead.”
    I could hear the horrow in his voice. I tried to smile. “I am already dead, my dear.” I kissed him. “Don’t worry. It takes more than that to finish me.”
    For a while we were slient, but then I just couldn’t help it anymore. I had to ask.
    “What has Jessica done with me?” It was just a whisper. “The bond is damadged.”
    “She put a spell on you.”
    “WHAT?”
    “Hush.” Phileas closed my mouth. “No need to scream.”
    “I’m gonna kill her!”, I said.
    Phileas laughed.
    “Stop laughing!”, I said and wanted to hit him, but he was holding me to tight. “You could better let me go so that I can break that spell!”
    But he wouldn’t let me go. He just smiled at me.
    “Damn, Phileas! Let go!”
    “No.”
    I tried to bite him, not seriously of course.
    “How do you want to break that spell anyway?”
    “I will find a way.”
    “You’re no magician.”
    “Oh, and you are?” I said in anger.
    He smiled at me and kissed my fronthead. “Why don’t you just ask me for help?”
    “Because I like to do things on my own.”
    “Lynn, Lynn.”, he whispered.
    “Please, Phileas. Let go. I have to break that spell!”
    “You’re hungry, aren’t you?”
    I nodded. “But I still have to break that spell!” I just wanted to start swearing again and curse Jessica, but Phileas stopped me.
    “First we get you something to eat.” He grapped my hand and lead me through his castle.
    I couldn’t do anything else but follow him.
    “Phileas.”, I asked while he handed me a bottle with red liquid. I took a look with raised eyebrows at it. “You still have that blood in bottles?”
    “Yep. Specially prepared for you.”
    Usually vampired can’t drink blood that doesn’t come from a fresh, warm body. But Phileas found a way to keep blood in bottles, so that he wouldn’t have to “order” food for me all the time. I could feel the warms of the blood.
    I couldn’t help smiling. But then I became sincere again. “Why didn’t you help me when Jessica put that spell on me?”
    Phileas arranged a chair for me and we sat down in front of each other. “Because I was too shocked. Don’t get me wrong, Lynn. I love you. But I know the spell she used.”
    “You know it?”
    “Yes. My mother taught it to me. And for a long time I thought I was the only one to know it.”
    I drank from the bottle.
    “Because my mother said, that only members of my family knew it.”
    I almost dropped the bottle. Caughind, because I swalloed too much blood, I tried to speak: “What???”
    Phileas leaned back in his chair. “That’s why I was so shocked.”
    I finally could talk normal again. “So you think she’s your sister or something like that?” Horror!!!!
    “I don’t know. My mother never said I had any siblings.”
    I drank another bit from the bottle. “She doesn’t look anything like you.”
    “I know.”
    Oh my. Jessica as Phileas’ sister? Could it be even worse?
    “Anyway.” Phileas looked at me with such an intensitiy, that I stopped the bottle halfway to my mouth. “Lynn, I offer you a deal.”
    “A deal?”
    “Yes.”
    I put the bottle down on the table between us. “What kind of deal?”
    “You want to find Angelo, I’ll help you.”
    “Phileas…”
    “Don’t tell me I couldn’t because it would ruin your deal with the demon!” He was angry. “I have the power to break it anyway!” Oh yeah, he was really angry.
    “You wont do that!”
    “Oh yes!”
    “You can’t!”
    “I can!”
    I was shocked. “But that’s… that’s unfair…”
    “Listen to what I have to say!”
    So I fell silent.
    “I’ll help you don’t find Angelo. We will find a way so that it wont affect your deal with your demon. I will also help you to break the spell. But I expect certain things in exchange.”
    “What do you want?” My voice sounded weak.
    “Three things.”
    “Tell me.”
    “At first I want you to sign the deal.”
    “That’s unfair!”
    Phileas leaned back. “Depends on the point of view.”
    I was shortly before throwing the bottle at him. But sadly it was still half full of blood and I didn’t want to waste that. I drank anotehr bit. A big big.
    “Lynn, you know that I love you.”
    I nodded.
    “You can trust me.”
    “I do.”
    “Then sign the deal.”
    I remembered how this whole thing started. All I want was to find Angelo Nicca and now I was here talking to the mand of my life and make him my absolute priority instead of Angelo.
    “Okay.”, I whispered. “How do you want to sign it?”
    “With blood.” Phileas put a dagger on the table. It looked smiliar to the dagger I had in my bag. I wanted to take the dagger to cut myself but Phileas wouldn’t let go.
    “Phileas, I need the dagger.”, I said.
    “Lynn.”
    Something in his voice made me look into his face.
    “I want you to bite me.”
    The bottle fell to the ground and broke into thousand pieces. The floor was covered by blood. Hunger, longing and craving raged in me. I recognised that I had stood up when I was standing in front of him. He put his arms around me and pulled me on his lap.
    “Phileas…”, I whispered. My teeth grew out, making my voice sound different. “I don’t know if I can stop.”
    “You can. I trust you.”
    “You have to drink my blood, too.” My voice became weaker. This wasn’t a normal longing for blood. This was also longing for the men. For love.
    “I will, my love. But at first you.”
    “I will hurt you.”
    “I will gladly take that pain.” His voice was deep and rough.
    I stroked a strand of hair from his fronthead. His eyes had turned dark, almost black. Just like my eyes.
    “Bite me.”, he whispered.
    I kissed him. Long and softly.
    “Lynn…”
    “Hush.” I could feel his fear, his fast beating heart when I came nearer to his neck. “I will try to make this as beautiful as possible for you.” I licked the place where I wanted to bite, scratched the skin softly with my sharp teeth. A drop of blood came.
    Phileas was shaking.
    “It’s okay.”, I whispered and kissed him again. “I love you.”
    “I love you, too.”
    And the I bit him.
    He gasped.
    His blood was the most delicous blood I had ever tasted. Now I understood what I meant to drink from someone you love.
    His power rushed through my veines. I almost drowned in it. I knew he was powerful, but this was far more than I had ever expected.
    Against all my fears I had no problem to stop drinking. There was still his blood on my lips when I stopped and looked into his eyes. They were black. Completely black. Like my eyes. We both were breathing heavily.
    I didn’t break the eyecontact to him when I raised my hand and bit into my own ankle. I pressed my bleeding skin on his lips. He opened his mouth, carefully tasted the blood. And the he put one hand around it, pressed it to his mouth and started to drinking.
    He, too, stopped after a short while, but for him it seemed harder.
    The wound on my ankle closed itself.
    We kissed.
    Heavily breathing we looked at each other then. Our eyes slowly turned from black back to normal.
    Phileas leaned against my shoulder and I put my arms around him.
    “Do you feel like this everytime you drink blood?”, he asked after a while.
    “No. It’s not that… intense. Usually.”
    Phileas smiled at me. His typical I’m-better-than-everyone-and-I-know-it-smile.
    I smiled back at him.
    “Be my wife, let me help you to kill Angelo and then spend the rest of your life with me.”
    “That’s my part of the deal?”
    “Yes.”
    I kissed him. “Well, I already accepted.”
    Phileas sighed in relief.

    I don’t know how long we sat there, but when we got up again sunset was just over.
    “Jessica should be awake.”, I said.
    “Yeah.” Phileas and I were holding hands when we were walking through the garden.
    “So”, I said and made him stop, “when will we get married?”
    “Hm. What about tonight?”
    I laughed. “Tonight? That’s impossible!”
    “Never say that when I’m around.”
    I rolled my eyes. “We don’t have a priest.”



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 10.08.2009, 20:10


    :big_applaus :big_applaus
    i loved it ,!!
    woooh they are engaged !!
    i wonder what will happen between Lynn & Jess.
    cause Lynn sure seems mad ,rofl



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 10.08.2009, 20:49


    oh yeah, she is :twisted:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 11.08.2009, 16:31


    maybe it's best if you finished up your piece since i haven't got a clue on what to write with this ending ,lol :roll: :oops:



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 11.08.2009, 18:43


    ok, I will try ;) But give me some time.



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 12.08.2009, 12:08


    alright ,but don't let me wait to long. :lol:
    my vacation is almost over :? :(
    wish it had bene longer ,since half on my vacation i'd been sick :x



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 20.08.2009, 20:43


    hey Idril ,how's the story coming along. *gg*



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 20.08.2009, 20:44


    I'm so sorry, I'm pretty busy at the moment and I didn't even start yet :(



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 25.08.2009, 19:32


    aaww ,that's to bad.
    well ,guess i'll have to wait ,cause i've tried to write a piece but can't think of anything that fits with this ending.
    hhmmm..



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 08.09.2009, 18:06


    yeah. I fear you have to wait a while... :?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    eddiefever - 12.09.2009, 21:43


    i've thought of a little piece btu am not sure if you'd be alright with it if i posted it :?



    Re: vampire story - whoever wants to add something is welcome

    Idril - 13.09.2009, 21:06


    just post it if you want ;)



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