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    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 04.12.2008, 15:57

    Mysterious events
    This is an Rpg written in English . I hope someone like this idea . It is sure, that the most of us aren´t experts. We all make mistakes. But as long as we understand eachother, it´s ok.

    nickname: Kaira
    title : Mysterious events
    place: our world
    time : 2008
    genre: all
    story:
    London, 2008. The city is visit by a mysterios murderer. His victims were all killed in the same way. A hole in their front reached until their heart, wich is missing.
    No one saw the murderer and still alive, but one night, a young homeless girl, see him by working and run away. She meets a group off teenager in the next day and tell them her story and that she is hunted.
    The teenager want to helph her, without knowing, that it will all things change .



    If you understand this text mostly, you are able to write in this rpg. I hope their will be some interessted.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 04.12.2008, 16:08


    Great^^ ...English in icq, English in a Game, English in a RPG.... my marks are gettin' better!
    I'm game (dtsch. ich bin dabei)



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 04.12.2008, 16:38


    Hahaha I'll show you all, 'cause english is my best subject!!*proud*Well I guess you don't want me to correct your mistakes, don't you?Because I could if you wanted me to.Anyway count me in, this ist gonna be SO MUCH exciting^^.I'm looking forward to see all your stupid mistakes xD (No seriously that was a joke, don't be mad with me, okay?)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 04.12.2008, 16:45


    well it would make me depressed to see all my faults, but when I make big mistakes, you are allowed to correct them, because I will take "Leistungskurs" English in "Oberstufe" :lol: (thats what my english teacher said because they haven´t these things there it sounds reylly funny when she says Oberstufe )
    well so please put your character in. And don´t take the role of the girl who see the murderer.



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 04.12.2008, 16:51


    two mistakes: would make me depressed and you are allowed to



    Re: Mysterious events

    ProjectZero - 04.12.2008, 16:51


    Kaira hat folgendes geschrieben: well it would make me depressive to see all my faults, but when I make big mistakes, you are aloud to correct them

    allowed ;-)
    Well...I'm just going to a "Hauptschule" and I really think, that I'm not good enough in english to do this...But I will try it!
    And I hope, that my english becomes better with this RPG :!:

    (And please...If I make too big mistakes, help me!)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 06.12.2008, 14:09


    name: Elena Ilott
    age: 16
    sex: female
    weapon: none at the beginning
    character: friendly, a little shy, helpful, sometimes naive, lovely, intelligent, she would do everything for her friends and her famaly
    look: The girl is Elena and the boy is Eddy
    life story: Elena lieved in London since her birth. She´s going to the Queen Elisebeth school and is very seucessfull in school .
    She wins the heart of the people very easely. The most important person for her is her little brother Eddy who is 6 years old and adores his sister.
    Her famaly ist completely normal .



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 06.12.2008, 14:53


    Argh...>.<
    The idea's so cool, I always wanted to take part in an english RPG but never had the courage to play with users with english as mother tongue because of the embarassing situation if I would make some mistakes...so this is the perfect chance for me!^^

    But...I don't really know if I'll take part. :/
    I'm already in 2 RPGs right now, maybe I'll join two more of them in the upcoming days, and 5 RPG's its like hell for me xD (yeah, the gift of multitasking wasn't given to me^^")
    So...could we make a compromise? At the herr der elemente forum, a voting is currently going on with my idea being in it. Could we say, if my idea doesn't win there, I'm joining here and if it wins, I don't?
    Sorry, but I have also lot of other things to do, I have to prepare for my exchange year and stuff...:(



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 06.12.2008, 14:55


    Name: Mariko Shinohara (maybe you know her from Creezan...but its not totally the same person, you know? )

    Age: 16

    Sex: female

    Charakter: at the beginning shy, friendly, she's quick at repartee,....you will see how she is xD

    Story: during the vacations she came whith her Dad (whos english) from Japan to London, because her dad get a promotion in his job. He is a very busy lord high commissioner and Mariko is often alone. Her mum (whos japanese) died when she was 10.

    Likes: traditional things, kriminal romans, sherlok holmes, ...and other things

    Dislikes: to be alone...

    Look: ehm...I dont have a picture yet...some people know her from creezan...if I find a pic i'll show you



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 06.12.2008, 15:01


    @der eine mit dem hut
    yes of course its okay. Thats why I have this idea. It was the same for me . I always want to be part of an english rpg but never had the courage too

    @all the other : please post your character as fast as possible. :grin:



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 06.12.2008, 18:08


    @Kaira: Yes sir!!

    Sorry i didn't post my character earlyer, but i was busy with searching for a good pic for her, 'cause - as you all know - my computer is broken again and so i can't use the pictures I've had already saved and had to look for new ones -.-....but now I found a good picture for my character and here she comes^^:

    Name: Hazel-Delilah Goodell (Hazel means "reddish-brown", like hazel-nuts, and Delilah means "delicate, weak".She was named "Hazel" because of her eye and hair colour and "Delilah" because of her personality and health condition)
    Age: 15
    Sex: Female
    Character:
    - V-E-R-Y shy
    - V-E-R-Y embarrassed (at anything you could possibly be embarrassed about)
    - V-E-R-Y quiet
    - V-E-R-Y concerned about what ohers think about her (she worries so much and so long about it, that she often forgets or misses the chance to say anything)
    AND (enough with this useless character, on with her god qualities:)
    - V-E-R-Y intelligent (You could say she's a genius or something like that.Despite her horrible, unsociable personality everyone has HIGH expectations for her)
    - and V-E-R-Y concerned about others (strangers, friends, family she doesn't care, if someone's injured she asks if she can help)
    Appearance:

    (NO that are NOT her normal clothes!Of coure she wears clothes that anyone else is wearing too......just that her clothes are alwasy expensive^^
    And YES I know, that she looks young for her age, but I think that this young appeareance fits her character very well)
    Story:
    Hazel is the daughter of a rich family, attends the best, private, just-for-girls school there is in england, gets always the best clothes, attends (or must attend) dinnerpartys for rich peoble (she even had a dinner with the Queen once) and never has to worry about a thing.But despite all these things she always feels lonely and her unsociable personality doesn't help in finding friends.She has no friends, because everyone thinks that she is extremely arrogant (because she doesn't speak much), to intelligent for anyone to speak with, or so amazing that she is out of reach (because of her extraordinary rich family and her extraordinary intelligence quotient.)She is an only child and only sees her parents on the dinnerpartys of other people.And she has a weak body, which means, that she easily gets sick or feverish.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 07.12.2008, 12:33


    ok we have three characters now, maybe four with der eine mit dem Hut.
    we will start when one more post his character. So please hurry up xxD I want to start
    well and when we start with the rpg, Corrections please in a pm. I think to much would annoy the rpg.
    It´s the same like in the other
    If you say something: Hello
    If you think somthing : How stupid
    If you do sth : She ran (please try to write in the past tense!)

    Ah well and at the beginning, no normal person has a weapon or magical powers. Maybe with the time you get some, but not at the beginning.



    Re: Mysterious events

    ProjectZero - 08.12.2008, 16:21


    I'm sorry for posting my character so late, but I have to do so many homeworks etc etc.

    Name: Hiko
    Age: 15
    Sex: Male
    Character: Find out... ;-)
    Look:
    Story:
    Hiko's parents died three years ago. He lives in a flat share with 5 others in his age.

    I hope I don't have to write today...Must do my homework...



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 08.12.2008, 16:31


    YAAAAAAY!!Someone posted his character!!Now we can beginn!!Thanks zero, really!!I'll ask Der eine mit dem Hut whether he wants to participate or not, is that okay?



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 08.12.2008, 16:36


    oh yeah guys I love you!!! We still have to wait for der eine mit dem Hut's answer aaaaand...then we can start *dance*



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 08.12.2008, 17:16


    well ,I think we will start on the 11.12 . I hope it´s okay for you



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 11.12.2008, 15:20


    ok here we go , let´s start guys! please bring your characters to the place of the story, in this momnet, the streets of London.

    It was one of the dark nights of december, in that no one likes to go out of their warm home.
    The moon shone and the street dogs were the only ones , wich were runnig through the fog.
    A little girl searched for food in the rubbish, but didn´t find anything. Then, she heard a quiet sound. She looked around the street corner and her heart wanted to stop. A person wearing in a long black coat, which was flattring in the cold wind stood there. He turnd his head and looked in her direction. His frosty blue eys seemed to burn a hole in her head to look inside.
    The girl turned around, faster as she thought she ever could and started to ran. Run run ! Was her only thought and she didin´t look back. She knew what []she[] had seen ! The murderer of London, the one who never was seen by anyone.

    ------------------------------------

    Elena was holding the umbrella in her arm. It was a terrible night and she wished to lie in her bed and sleep, like every normal person does at this time of night. But she wanted to go to a Exchange year and so she had to earn a bit money by herself. For example by taeching how to play the piano to childs. The mother of the last girl, had invited her to dinner and Elena couldn´t refuse.
    Suddenley, she heard steps. She looked in the direction,they came from, and hoped, that it would be just an peaceful ambler



    (thank you for correction toph)



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 11.12.2008, 15:40


    Hazel was walking aroun in the streets.She was wearing a thick, expensive coat and thick expensive boots to keep the coldness away, but somehow she was still feeling cold.Just that that cold had nothing to do with the temperature.Hazel just ran - once again - away from home, hoping, that her parents will worry about her.She would return to the huge mansion in the morning and would find her parents not at home, and not knowing that she was away the whole night.It was always like that.Hazel sighted and looked up.A tall girl, maybe one or two years older than herself, looked into a narrow alley, not noticing her.Hazel quickly hid behing the corner of a house.It was dangerous at night and she didn't want to be seen, because her face was widely known....well not for herself but for being her fathers daughter.

    (the tall girl is elena)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 11.12.2008, 16:03


    (the looking of the gril, but she looks more dirty and her clothes are worser http://img3.imagebanana.com/view/ke1boljb/anime_girl_6652headshot.jpg)

    The steps came to Elena. She clasped the handle of her umbrella. Then the person appeared in the darkness. It was a little girl, ok maybe 12 or 13 years old, looking dirty and afraid. As she saw Elena, she stopped. "Please helph me ,"she whined,"he´s after me!


    Elena smiled to the girl. Whats wrong? Who´s behind you? She looked at her frozen body. Come, you can go with me. I will make you a warm cup of tea all right? All things are good then .
    The girl misstrustful looked to the hand of Elena... then she looked in her face. "You teased me, don´t you?"
    Elena looked surprised to her. "No of course not ! I am serious!



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 11.12.2008, 17:18


    Hazel listened to the talk.Now she carefully looked around the corner she was hiding behind.The small girl was wearing very light ans dirty clothes.Surely she was feeling very cold.Slowly, quietly and carefully Hazel stepped around the corner.The two girls still didn't notice her.Well that was normal, no one ever noticed Hazel, when she was trying to be quiet.
    U-Um....
    She unbuttoned her thick coat.
    This coat.....it's warm.....you....do you wan't it?
    She was talking to the small girl.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 11.12.2008, 18:06


    Okay, here I come!^^
    First, my character...I quickened him a bit because of my lack of time, but I hope it's okay.^^

    Name: Mathew "Matt" Brown
    Age: 16 (becomes 17 soon)
    Gender: Male
    Appearance: Link
    Personality: (If you know "Naruto", just imagine a real-life-shikamaru, this perfectly fits him. xP) Matt's most decent character trait is his lazyness. He is a notoric long-sleeper, and even at midday, he's still sleepy sometimes. His voice has also most of the time a "I-dont-care"-vibe, but in fact, he is very interested and curious in meeting new people and making new friends.
    Apart of his lazyness, Matt is very friendly and helpful. He also has a lot of potential he could exhaust if he would be more interested in things.
    Story: Matt grew up in a completely normal average family, nothing special happened to him until now. The flat of his family is a bit outside of London, in a slightly bigger suburb.

    and now...begin! xD

    Matt was going down the empty street, the hands in his trouser pockets, and looked with a slightly nerved expression in the dark sky spreading above him. He was heading home. Today, he visited a friend right after school and it had gotten later that Matt has thought. And now, he had still to walk around a half hour till he would arrive at home...it was really a pain.
    Matt sighed.
    Suddenly, he heard weak voices from a sidestreet branching off the one he was walking along right now.
    It was not only one, but a bit more voices, maybe three or four.
    Well...I'll come home late anyway, why not check out whats going on there...
    He walked as slow as before in the little street where the voices came from, and soon recognized three persons, one was a bit smaller than the other two.
    He stepped a little closer, until he was in sight for everyone and looked at the little gir with the dirty clothes.
    Poor thing...



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 11.12.2008, 19:35


    The little girl didn't answer.Hazel looked at the ground, glanced up to the little girl, looked down again.Then, slowly and carefully, like she always moved, she took a few steps forward.She looked at the girl, then she took a few more steps.Now she was just four steps away from the little girl.She took her coat and held it out to the small girl.
    I.....I'm.....giving this to you.....come on....don't be frightened.....you can have it.....
    But in fact Hazel looked more frightened than the small girl.She turned red and her face was turned to the ground.
    Oh no...I'm sure she thinks I'm stupid for giving my coat away....what to do...?What to do?Maybe she's frightened by me...what should I do?
    Tears welled up in Hazels eyes.
    Don't cry now you idiot!You want this little girl to feel save, don't you?!Then don't cry!But....I can't help it.......



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 11.12.2008, 20:11


    Mariko walked through the street. In her right hand, she carried a shopping-bag. She sighted, her father wasnt at home, he was still on the commissariat. Every day, every week, he always was busy because of this stupid homicides which happened here in London. She wraped her coat closer around herself*. Damn it! It was so cold here in London, colder then in Tokyo. Mariko wanted to go back to Tokyo. She hates London and she didnt has friends here. She stopped walking and closed her eyes. Because of the rain no one could see that tears running down to her cheek. I want to go back....back to Shinichi.. she thought





    (*soll eig heißen sie schlang ihren Mantel enger um sich....I think...I made many many erorrs :oops: :-( )



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 11.12.2008, 21:46


    The little girl started to smile." You two are friendly, I like you !"
    She took the coat . "Thank you."
    She took also Elenas hand. "I will go with you. When I stay alone, he will kill me." She smiled to the both.

    Elena, staring until this moment to the foreign boy in the shadow, looked to the girl. "Kill you ?"

    The little girls smile became bigger. "Yes I think so. He is the murderer who kills all the people. I don´t think he like little girls, do you think?"Elena looked to the two younger girls and then to the boy, or was it a man ? Maybe it was the murderer !!! My god ! I have to save the childs, and maybe myself, too. What should I do?I could attacked the man, boy, what ever, murderer with my umbrella . But would that be very sucessfull? Disbutable .



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 11.12.2008, 22:59


    Hazel started to smile again as the little girl took her coat.
    Thank god!Now she will warm up!
    Hazel took the last four steps towards the two other girls ans smiled shyly, while looking to the ground.She lifted her face and looked at the tall girl.
    Oh no!Whats with that face?She looks.....terrified...is....is there something behind me?!
    With the same terrified expression, that the tall girl had, Hazel turned around and looked at the boy who was standing there. Who is this?!Why is he stairing at us?What does he want?!Oh no.....maybe he is the murderer.....no...no..I don't want to die!I'm scared!
    Hazel decreased the distance between her and the tall girl to zero.(Hazel reduzierte die distanz zwischen dem großen Mädchen und ihr auf null.)She hid her face in the coat of the tall girl while she begann to shake all over.

    (Question: The man/boy/whatever elena was thinking about is matt, isn't he?)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 11.12.2008, 23:36


    (yes he is)
    Elena looked at the girl, hiding her face in Elenas coat . She stroked softly over her head. All things are right .She say quietly . Then she looked to the foreign person.
    Don´t draw near! I have a weapon ! She said to him, looking as gaunt as she could

    The little girl looked to the person too now . That isn´t he !



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 12.12.2008, 15:06


    Matt raised one eyebrow and stepped a little nearer so that the others could fully see him.
    "Unfortunately, I'm not a murderer...sorry..." he said with his slightly monotone, but ironic voice. Then, he looked at the three others a little bit closer and placed his grey shoulder back on the wet ground.
    "Okay, and what are you actually? A paranoia-self-help-group?" Suddenly, the little girl caught his eye.
    Damnit...I shouldn't have said this...

    (Matt wears the pullover and the t-shirt as on the picture I posted, additionally he is also wearing a greay-brown jacket and this shoulder bag xP]



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 12.12.2008, 15:33


    Mariko shacked her head pull yourself together, Mariko! she thought I can call him at the week end. Then she went right into the Bakerstreet. Mostly the street was very empty, also today. The cold wind soughed between the black houses. She went on.....suddelnly there was a noise....a snap or something else.... at the end of the street there was something. Under the street-lamp it seemed apparitional.... now Mariko heard voices....she stepped up to the voices...



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 12.12.2008, 15:39


    (Heeeeh^^ Matt has style!xD)

    Hazel turned her head to the boy.
    Not....the murderer?Then....then...oh no!I must be a bother to the tall girl!
    She quickly pulled away from elena, while turning red and looking at the ground.
    S....Sorry...
    Then she turned to the boy.
    S-sorry...but I easily....get scared....um.....
    She looked at the tall girl and the small girl.
    I.....I'm Hazel......Hazel-Delilah Goodell.....n-nice to meet you....



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 12.12.2008, 16:54


    Elena smiled too . I am Elena Ilott, nice to meet you too. And sorry, she said to MAtt.
    Of course, she didn´t knwo the name of Hazel, she wasn´t interessting in the rich people.
    (hey I can´t write today, I am very sick and have to become (gesund) until sunday, having a important match .)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 12.12.2008, 17:09


    ( uaaah whats wrong with you? :cry: please get healthy soon )

    Mariko take a deep breath and sighed. It was only a group of young people who were talking...she walked past the group



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 12.12.2008, 18:31


    (Hey suki!Don't just walk past us!Yuo have to talk to us!)

    Hazel smiled shyly and looked at the small girl, who was waering her coat.
    ....And what's...your name..?...Poor thing...how old are you...?



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 12.12.2008, 18:47


    (My head is close and I can´t move it)

    My name is Zero and I am not a thing.
    the little girl said and looked at her.



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 12.12.2008, 19:39


    ("Poor thing", is said, when you pity someone... -.-
    Kaira is also a poor thing^^ get well soon, okay?)

    Hazel tilted her head.
    Zero...?Like "nothing"....thats not a nice name.....who gave it to you...?
    Hazel hesitated but then she patted Zeros head ad smiled.
    If you like......I could give you a better name...one more fitting for you...

    (Don't misunderstand, hazel is being kind to zero, she isn't insulting her!)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 12.12.2008, 19:50


    (I understand that with poor thing, but Zero didn´t)

    I give it me by myself I don´t want another name, that belongs to me like your one to you!
    She looked scarried in th dark little street wher she came from. Please we have to go, he´s coming ! I feel it !



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 12.12.2008, 20:05


    Zero...man, the selfconfidence of this girl ain't so good... Matt thougt sarcastic.
    As he heard what the girl had said, he threw a sceptic look at her.
    "He is coming? The murderer? I would say you should be in bed next time when your father is watching horror movies...and actually, you should be home right now anyway. I mean, how old are you?"
    Matt thougt about leaving this place. This little girl was quite odd, and the taller girl said before she would take her home for a tea...so he seemed to be a waste here...and also, he had could've been at the border of the city right now if he hadn't stopped here...yeah, it would be better to keep heading home instead of attending a little afraid child...

    (come on, let the murderer appear, otherwise, Matt will leave immediately! xD)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 12.12.2008, 21:11


    (okay okay xDD she'll come back xD )


    Suddenly Mariko stopped. Someone in the group said something about the murder. Did they know something about him? Every information about him was IMPORTANT. If Marikos father caught the murder, he has more time for her daughter and she was not lonely anymore.
    what did you said? Do you know something about the murder? please, you have to tell me all about him! she said despaired.



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 12.12.2008, 21:39


    Another girl just appeared out of nowhere, causing Hazel to shriek quietly, while stumbling over her own feet and finally bumping against matt.Quickly she turned aroung to him and bowed her head.
    Oh no I'm so sorry, so sorry....forgive me....but as I said....I get scared easily....
    Now she quickly turned around to the new girl.
    U-Um....this little girl, Zero, says that she saw the murderer.....Oh!Excuse me....I didn't want to be rude......



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 12.12.2008, 21:44


    Mariko looked at the younger girl Y-you saw the murder? p..please can you tell me what do you know about him?? How did he lookes like? she asked without a breath



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 12.12.2008, 21:50


    Elena looked first to the girl named Hazel. Oh god, that is a nervous girl. She is really chute yeah but it would be bether if she stoped say sorry all the time.

    In this moment, a man appear from nowhere, his cold blue eys burning with a black flame. He a long blakc coart, and had short black hairs.
    Good evening . He said polite. I am glad you find my sister. She´s a bit weird and run away from home when were shortly didn´t look at here. I am sorry when she annoyed you.

    Zero was hiding behind Elena and presse her face in Elenas`coat.
    "He´s lying !!" she screamd



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 12.12.2008, 21:57


    Hey, don't touch her! Mariko said and looked at the man seriously. If the man hurts the girl, she will hurt the man. Mariko was able to defend her, because she was very good at martial arts.



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 12.12.2008, 22:56


    Hazel quickly hid behind Elena.
    Now we're in trouble!I'm sure HE is the real murderer!....I must help the others!
    She stepped in front of elena and held her mobile phone out.
    E-excuse me, sir, but you are troubling us....I must ask of you to stop bothering us.....my house is just around the corner, and with just one call I can make serveral bodyguards rush here.....
    Hazels voice was very squeaky and she didn't look coinfident at all.After a few moments of silence she typed a number in her cellphone.
    H-Hello?It's me Orlando....yes....yes I am at Malin street....no I'm not, a strange man approached me and a few people that are with me....yes, please sent the protection squat...thank you, Orlando...
    With that she hung up and looked at the man with the black coat.
    Sir, the protection squat of the Goodell family will be here in two minutes.....I-If you hurt anyone of us I....I will order them to attack you....so please don't bother us anymore..!
    Hazels voice was even more squeaky than before and tears welled up in her eyes, but she had a very stubborn look on her face.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 12.12.2008, 23:11


    This call was not essential... There's no reason to be afraid! He's alone and we are five. Mariko said and now go away! Or should I show you the right way?!



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 12.12.2008, 23:35


    Okay...the girl alone had been odd, but now this was freaky.
    Matt didn't moved during the man had spoken and leaned against a street lantern until then, but now, he became nervous. Quickly, he grabbed his bag and threw it over his shoulder.
    "If you don't mind, I'm leaving...this becomes too weird to me." Matt said and turned his back to the little group.
    Although he wanted to go out of this situation, he walked a little slower with his hand still in the trouser pockets. Even if he had no skills in self-defense, he could hear the voices and the conversation this way and recognize if something would happen.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 13.12.2008, 11:49


    The man make a weird voive and elena need asecond to regonize, that it was a laugh

    How sweet You really think I am scared of protection squat or kids?But you right. To much deads wouldn´t be so good, don´t you think. Maybe we should have ouer conversation in an other time. Just two things I have to do now
    He make a hand move and Matt was pulling back . A second hand move and Zero falling on to the ground, with opened eys staring in to the night .
    He smiled. You bether never told about this. It would be bether for your health. Have fun kids, I will come to you again when I have more time.
    Said the man before he disappaered



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 13.12.2008, 12:06


    Just a few second after the man vanished into the darkness, the teenagers could herar the sound of cars and one moment after that they were surroundet by ca. 15 men in black suits.One of them kneeled down in front of Hazel, who was also sitting on the ground because her knees gave in as the murderer killed zero.
    Lady Goodell we've come to pic you up.Would you like us to follow the man that approached you and you friends?
    Hazel shook her head and stood up.
    I-It okay...no need...I think...
    She looked at the others.
    U-Um....would you like....to come to my house...?...You must be tired after all this....or I could arrange a drive home for you....as you can see...the streets are dangerous at night....



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 13.12.2008, 12:15


    Matts eyes widened as he was pulled back. It was like a invisible hook had been piled in his back...and the thing that was more frightening was, that the man never touched him...and now he was just like...gone away?
    The young man blinked as Hazel asked her question.
    "Well, it would be good if I were home soon, but I can call my parents that I'm late today. Erm, I mean I could use your telephone, couldn't I?"
    he raised from the ground he was fallen to and knocked the dust out of his clothes.



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 13.12.2008, 12:20


    Hazel quickly looked to the ground.
    O-Of course...here you go..
    She gave him her cellphone.
    Then...would you all like to drink a cup of tea...or whatever you prefer...at my home....?...I think it would cure the shock...even when it's.....just a little bit....



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 13.12.2008, 14:29


    Mariko bent down to the little girl and closed the eyes of her. It was not the first time that she saw a dead person. Because of her father's job, she had seen a lot of the bad of this world. And a hobby of herself was to be a detective. At most she liked Sherlok Holmes, the greatest detective who ever had existed. I think we should call my father.... Mariko said quietly and more to herself then to the others. Then she cursed London is so horrible!



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 13.12.2008, 14:53


    (äm Zero is dead ^^ sr when I didn´t make it clear. )

    Elena didn´t hear what Hazel said, she just kneed next to Zero and hold her head between her hands. The eys of the girl were blind, her mouth opened and she was absulutly dead.
    Elena never before seen a dead person, but she couldn´t say a word.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 13.12.2008, 15:14


    ( oh..... ehm...I edited my post... I hope it makes any sense :lol: )



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 13.12.2008, 15:54


    (it´s ok suki thx)
    Elena nodded. Yeah.... I think it would be the best....
    dead..dead... but why? how? I didn´t touch her !



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 13.12.2008, 16:07


    (okay....ehm...and how did the girl die? You didn't write this, did you? )


    Mariko looked at the girl which was speeking to her is everything okay with you? It seems you never saw a dead body before. Maybe it's better to don't look at her.



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 13.12.2008, 17:47


    Hazel was shoked too, really, a person was just killed in front of her eyes, who wouldn't be shocked.But she didn't show it.If no one else was, she had to be strong.She laid a hand on elenas shoulder.
    It.....wasn't you foult....or anyone elses.....and it can't be helped.....so come on.....lets go to my house......okay....?
    She turned red again.
    They all surely think I'm a cold hearded person.......poor zero...she...she....she didn't deserve this!
    Hazel sniveled, but then she pulled herself together, rubbed away the tears that were jet again welling up in her eyes and smiled at elena.
    Let's go....okay...?



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 13.12.2008, 18:10


    Mariko looked at the other girl but she said nothing. Then she looked at the dead little girl again. Then Mariko took out her cellphone and pushed a few buttons Dad? Please, you have to come to the Malin-street. A little girl was killed or something else She hung up and looked at the others My dad is coming, if you want, you can go at home



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 13.12.2008, 18:31


    Matts hand gripped his head.
    First it had been weird, but it had become shocking right now.
    This was definitely the wrong place for him...
    "Thanks." he said as Hazel was giving him her cellphone and dialed the number of his home. As someone took the hearer, he turned a bit away from the group.
    "Hi Mom? Yeah, I know I'm late...and I will be home soon...just got in an unappreciated situation...what? no, not something dangerous...yeah yeah, don't worry, I'm coming. Bye." he clicked the "Hang-up-Button" and gave the phone back to Hazel. "Damnit, she's so troublesome..." he sighed. "But now, we should leave I think. Her father is arriving and so we have no need to stay here anymore."



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 13.12.2008, 19:58


    Elena stood up. She is dead...... she thougt and went to hazel . Her mind didn´t want to understand. "Yes...maybe we should go... She turned to Mariko. Maybe you should go with us. When...he will come back...well...


    (I did !A second hand move and Zero falling on to the ground, with opened eys staring in to the night ) That should be mean, she is dead. Just as I said . Not clear. )



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 13.12.2008, 20:16


    ( oh sry....I wrote nonsense...I meant HOW did the girl die )


    Mariko shacked her head No, I can defend myself. I'm not scared about this guy and if I'm going away and something find this girl lying here....well...you know that's not very good. Furthermore I have to wait for my Dad



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 13.12.2008, 22:26


    Then we should also stay here...

    (she died also in the misterious wise, but she has still her heart.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 13.12.2008, 22:35


    (aaah okay :D )


    Mariko nodded a little do whatever you want, but when you are scared go away that's not a nice sight for a girl like you She looked at her wristwatch. The girl died circa 7 minutes before and now it was 20.07... it was a nearly "perfect" time. The girl was killed to the tick.
    From afar Mariko could hear the police sirenes...



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 14.12.2008, 08:06


    (If Mariko doessn't go with the others, HOW exactly are the others gonna meet her again?!)

    Hazel nodded slowly, then she plucked on matts sleeve and grabbed elenas hand.She turned her head to matt.
    .....By the way.......whats your name...?
    The men in the black suits opened the door of a limousine and the three got in.Hazel looked back at mariko.
    You sure.....that you don't want to come...?.....Honestly....I wouldn't want to be....alone with zero....

    (Just let mariko get in a fight with her dad or something and the let her go with the others)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 14.12.2008, 11:23


    ( f.e. at school??? )

    hmm...well...perhaps...it's better if you wait a few minutes. It could be that my father have question to us....if Mariko was faithful, she didn't want to be alone...but she would never say that..



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 14.12.2008, 13:00


    "Mathew. But that's name troublesome, just call me Matt." he said and smiled slightly. That girl was really shy...but somehow different from the illusion he always has had of rich people. He always had thought that they were arrogant and all this stuff...well, it was everytime a surprise being proved wrong, even if it was the bad side...
    Then he sat into the limousine. He had never been in such a car, and it was really stunning.
    "Wow...really comfortable." he said a little sleepy and looked out of the window with a bored look on his face.



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 14.12.2008, 13:27


    Hazel smiled slightly at matt.
    ...Matt....huh...?
    Then she looked around in the limousine.
    ..Is it really...that comfortable..?...What are normal cars like..?

    [Then let the detective-dad appear already^^...so that we can go on with the story^^]



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 14.12.2008, 15:10


    ( okay okay...BUT he's no detective...he's the lord high commissioner :razz: )

    Two police cars with red blinking sirenes stopped in front of them. The door of the first car opened and a dark-blond-haired man got out of it. Mariko! Honey, what happened? he looked at the dead girl no, not again...how could it happen? Did you saw how the girl died? Mariko nodded yeah, but...hmm...no not really...suddenly she fell down and was...dead...I couln't find indications of a poisoning Mariko's father threw a glance at her. He didn't liked it if his daughter did dangerous things like this...a dead body was not good for a little girl..
    well, ..okay he said and looked at the others I don't think that you saw something else... Mariko, you have to go with that kids somewhere else...I call you when I am at home. I don't want you to be alone at home

    ( omg.....thats a very very bad text xD )



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 14.12.2008, 16:19


    Hazel stepped out of the car and in front of marikos dad.She gave him a business card.
    ...On this card is my cellphone and home number.....call when you want your daughter come home......or when you want to ask something...regarding this incident....
    She plugged on marikos sleeve.
    .....You coming...?...Let's not bother you dad at work...okay...?
    She went in the car again and just pulled mariko with her, because Mariko didn't look like she was willing to obey her dad.Then she gave the man that had held the door open the command to close it and told the driver to bring them home.

    ----------------------------

    Afeter 3 minutes they arrived at the front gate of a HUGE mansion.The car stooed in front of it and the window hazel was sitting at opened.Hazel reached out of the window and typed in a very long number in a macchine standing beside the front gate.It were at least 30 numbers and she used all five fingers to type in the number.Then she pulled her arm back into the car, the window closed, the front gate opened and the car drove in.After they drove along a very long way to the front door the car stopped and the car was opened by a butler.
    Welcome home Lady Goodell.And welcome to the Goodell-mansion to your friends, too.
    Hazel just nodded and got out of the car.Immediately a butler came running and held an umbrella over her to shelter her from the rain.Hazel turned around.
    ...Come on...you don't want to...stay in the car...don't you...?

    (There will come butlers with umbrellas for the other guys too)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 14.12.2008, 16:45


    Mariko got out of the limousine, too. She mumbled something that sounds like crazy. It prickled into the tips of her finger. She don't wanted to sit here and do nothing. She wanted to solve this case! Mariko was no little girl which need so much protection....



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 14.12.2008, 16:57


    thats weird ! What is this girl ? the daughter of a famous human?

    Elena got out of the car, being very confused that a man was coming ,holding an umbrella over her too.
    She followed Hazel.
    No one would ever belived that story ! Maybe it was just a weird dream....



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 14.12.2008, 17:05


    ( Hazel reminds me at Tomoyo-chan xDD do you know her??)



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 14.12.2008, 17:15


    (No who is she?)

    Everyone got teir own butlers with umbrellas helding over them.As the group approached the front door is swung open on its own.Inside four maids and one butler waited for them.The maids welcomed them and took their coats and bags.
    The butler stepped up to hazel.
    Lady Goodell, welcome home.
    hazel smiled at him.
    I'm back Orlando.....Thanks for sending the protection squat...Are my parents...home...?
    Orlando shook his head.
    They are on a business meeting in japan.They will be coming back in two days.
    Hazel looked at the floor.
    I..see..
    Then she turned around to the others with a shy smile.
    ...Well...welcome to my home...let's get you out of these wet clothes, okay....?
    Three maids approached elena, mariko and hazel, and led them in a room, matt was led into a different room.Minutes later they all came out in dry clothes.
    Hazel smile at them.
    Lets go....to my room...okay?
    She led them upstairs into a huge room, with a king size bed, a fireplace, a sofa, LOADS of bookshelves, a TV and all gameconsoles a kid ever wanted.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 14.12.2008, 17:31


    ( tomoyo daidoji is sakura kinomotos best friend...do you know who she is?? )

    Mariko looked at Hazel it seems, that you are often alone, too she said softly



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 14.12.2008, 18:10


    Elena looked at her closes. Never she thaught that she would wear such things ! Then she looked around in the room. Wow... You get all what you want, don´t you? It has to be graet to play here with your brothers and sisters !



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 14.12.2008, 18:10


    Hazel nodded with a shy smile.
    Do you know....GW-Cooperation..?.."GW" is a abbreviation for Goodwell......my dad and my mum lead the company....so they're always busy attending meetings or dinners they're invited to...
    She pointed at all the gameconsoles and at a shelf full of videogames for computer or other consoles.
    ...These are all products of my parents company.....if you want any of these, you can have them...i never play with them...i like reading books better...
    Now she looked at elena.
    ...I don't have brothes and sisters...i'm an only child....
    She tilted her head a little.
    ...by the way....how old are you all....?

    (Lets just say GW-Cooperation is a very famous company that produces games...like nintendo^^)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 14.12.2008, 22:43


    "I'm 16." Matt said and let himself fall exhaused on the huge bed.
    "Gah, I wish I had such a bed...all the video games and the other things are just a waste if you have a warm and comfortable bed...but maybe you should also go out sometimes, should'nt you? It would be good for your ego...but what I'm talking about, I sound like my mom..." he sighed visible nerved and closed his eyes.



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 14.12.2008, 23:37


    Hazel smiled at matt.
    ...I go out often....it's not healthy to stay in my room...all day long....
    Then she looked at the others.
    ...And how old are you...?...You probably didn't expect it, but im...15....I'm often told that I...look very joung...



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 15.12.2008, 15:15


    Elena looked at her. Ähm. yeah.. sorry to say but you really look very young. I would say you are 12 or 11 years old..
    I am sixteen. And I have a little brother. He would feel in this room like in paradise. He loves to play with such games because my parents don´t like it and so we haven´t such stuff.


    The Elena took a look at Matt. You like beds don´t you? she grined



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 15.12.2008, 15:28


    I'm 16, too Mariko said uninvolved. With her thoughts, she was at the criminal case again..



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 15.12.2008, 16:44


    Matt opened an eye and looked at Elena.
    "Yeah...they're like the second best invention ever...the first one is the sleep." he said and grinned back slightly. Then, he turned his head to Hazel. "15? Man, you really don't look like this..."



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 15.12.2008, 19:46


    Hazel turned bright red and looked around nervously.
    ..W-Well I...I just wanted you to....know my age....because I know, that I looke vey young and.....I didn't want you to speak to me...like I'm a child......Oh!Dont misunderstand!..You're all very nice and you....didn't say anything wrong....I just wanted to ...well....set things klear if you know what I mean...
    She tyied a shy smile, then she looked at elena.
    If you want....you can take some of the games home.....or if your Parents don't allow it then....you can bring your brother here.....I don't mind at all...I mean.....I can prepare a room for him,....so he can stay overnight too.....well....he probably wont be allwoed to stay here alone....if you want...you can come here with him....
    She smiled shyly and nervously again, then she looked at matt.
    ..You can stay here too someday....i mean if you want to....well......We have beds of this size in every room so....if you ever want to sleep soundly and comfortably....you're welcome to come here....
    Hazel smiled again, while turning red.This time she turned red, because she was happy.She never ever even dreamed about inviting friends to stay overnight at her house.Then she lit up and quickly turned to mariko.
    Of course you are welcome to stay here too!....Well....Only if you want to.....what's wrong....you don't feel well...?....Oh, sorry!!of course you all don#t feel well....well....after that incident earlyer I mean...nobody would feel well after that....of course.....
    She turned bright scarlet again



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 15.12.2008, 20:00


    Mariko looked surprised at Hazel oh...no...thats...thats not the reason. Its not the first time I saw a dead body..... she bacame silent.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 15.12.2008, 20:25


    Elena went next to Hazel and smiled. Calm down ok ?
    She got her to the bed and let made her to sit down next to her. Thank you very much. I will tell my brother about yor inventation.
    Mh...do you think zero has a famaly or someone else whow care about her ??



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 15.12.2008, 22:40


    Hazel smiled quickly, to clear the misunderstanding.
    N-nonono!No!Please don't misunderstand..!...This...I'm....always like...well....like this...you know....I'm always nervous...and get embarrassed very easily.....so....it's not your fault....really!...It's just...my character....don't worry about it...
    Now she smiled again while turning red.Then her eyes got sad.
    ..I....I don't think that Zero had someone like that...because....you know....she said, that her name was given to her by herself....and she had no basic knowledge.Remember, when I said "poor thing"?She thought that I had referred to her as a thing.I thought that implied, that there was no one to teach her such things as metaphors, no parens or guardians.
    Her voice got more coinfident as she spoke.This was like she was in shool.She just had to say something she already knew.But now she turned very, very red.She looked almost anxiously.
    B-But...well......thats just what I think.......d-don't mind it.....

    (With this I tried to imply that hazel is very intelligent.If she knows what she's talking about, then she gets more coinfident...and she knows a lot of things^^)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 17.12.2008, 15:12


    How can you do that? Mariko suddenly asked to the people in this room. How do you brave to do nothing?! She wandered up and down, up and down into the room......
    I don't want to be like a little brave girl, who do whatever someone said... I don't want to wait till next week or next month or more better next year when they caught the killer! What's wrong with you? Do you want to wait till the streets get safe again? argh! This city makes me crazy



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 17.12.2008, 16:04


    ("Brave" heißt mutig, ich denke suki wollte "brav" sagen, also "obedient"...und was sollte der erste satz auf deutsch heißen suki?)

    Hazel was so surprised, that she jumped on her feet.Then she quickly sat down again and blushed.
    ....W-Well I do plan to...do that....waiting.....what do you want to do....we're only childs....



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 17.12.2008, 16:22


    ( joa o_o ehm...das zweite was mariko sagt sollte heißen "wie könnt ihr es nur aushalten nichts zu tun" und das brave hab ihc bei leo nachgeguckt....is mir gar nicht aufgefallen...bei mir stand da einmal aushalten und einmal brav ... >.< peinlich)



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 17.12.2008, 18:44


    (Hier benutz lieber die seite: http://www.dict.cc/?s=brave )



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 17.12.2008, 18:51


    (^^ macht doch nciht,änder es doch grad)

    Elena looked at her. I love this city, London is the best . Of course we will wait! The police is bether pour things like that. just what Hazel said, we are only childs.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 17.12.2008, 19:06


    ( hemm...ty xD next time I use this "translator" or...my dictionary.... I'm sorry...I can't concentrate myself...I'm very tired, 'cause I wrote an article for English. Maybe that was too much English for me.. xDD )

    Mariko looked a little angry at her. Only childs? hmhm...that's the right stance Mariko thought There is nothing what is more bad then London Mariko mumbled



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 17.12.2008, 19:21


    Hazel blushed again.
    .....I....I like this town.....very much....this town is also....the Queen's town, so....I'm honored to live here.....And um.....if possiple....p-please don't fight.......something....like that....
    Hazel felt very uneasy.She easyly got aniouxly by nature, but if someone raised his or her voice Hazel inclined to get very scared.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 17.12.2008, 22:49


    Elena, who was sitting next to Hael put her arms around her shoulder
    No one want you to fight, Mariko is just a bit... nervous...
    She looked to the other girl with a "say yes!" mine and smiled then .



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 18.12.2008, 18:20


    (Elena, who was sitting next to Hazel, put her arms around her shoulder.)



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 18.12.2008, 18:45


    Mariko sighed and said nothing. Then she nodded coerced....



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 18.12.2008, 21:11


    Hazel smiled, while blushing.
    W-well if thats the case.......then I'm sorry I've said something.....well....disturbing.....
    Suddenly Hazel jumped up.
    R-right!Elena, what about your parents?Won't they.....be angry with you for....coming home....so late...?



    Re: Mysterious events

    Kaira - 18.12.2008, 23:39


    No, no, it´s ok. I would come at eleven a clock , but a pupil was sick and so I was finisched earlyer . So I have one more houer.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 19.12.2008, 13:32


    "Elena is right." said Matt, maybe a bit late with his sleepy voice. "We just can't do anything in this case...unless you want to have ripped your heart away. Just let the police do this, they have weapons, fighting skills...all what we dont have. Also, London ist great. Have you always been on the London eye? Stunning view, I tell you." the last to sentences he said a little bit more huffy.

    (I always use leo...)



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 19.12.2008, 16:17


    (Always heist immer, ich denke du meinst ever, also irgendwann mal, hut^^)

    Hazel smiled.
    ..W-well then...do you want a car....to drive you home later...?
    Then she looked at matt.
    I've been there so many times....I can't count them......ist so amazing....but you know whats even more amazing...?I can give you a ride...with a helicopter.....our pilot would fly us over the whole town.....well if I tell him that is....
    She smiled shyly again.Matt was very much the first boy, besides her father and her butlers, she had ever spoken to.If a male said something to her, she usually blushed, turned away and ignored him.She was scared of most of the males, but matt sat in the same boat as her.He yust witnessed how a little girl died along with her, so he wasn't THAT scary.....but still a little.
    I'm trying hard to get along with him.I want to be friends, but....a male is still a little...you know......NO!I have to practise to get along with males!Thats what father told me, and I have to listen to whatever father says!
    Hazel shook her head to drive away the troubled expression on her face and smiled at matt.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Der eine mit dem Hut - 19.12.2008, 20:17


    (No, you understood me right, toph.^^ I ALWAYS use leo, which means I look all my words I don't know up there.^^)

    "Wow, thats really...un...friendly?" he said, a little bit surprised. "But I can't let your butlers get in trouble just because of a demotivated guy who wants to fly with a helicopter..." he threw a tilted grin on her.



    Re: Mysterious events

    Suki - 19.12.2008, 20:41


    Mariko rolled with her eyes. tss London-lovers she thought and disappeared with her thoughts anywhere else

    (I hope this post makes sense :razz: )



    Re: Mysterious events

    toph - 20.12.2008, 17:12


    (Das war schon klar, aber im text: "Have you always been on the london eye?", war always falsch.Da muss ever hin^^)

    hazel smiled quickly and shook her head.
    No, no!It's their job to do.....as I and my parents say......They would get bored otherwise......Moreover, the pilot gets paid for hours,....so its okay to let him fly us around......then he gets more money.....



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