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Re: WHAT THIS IS
Eddy - 20.04.2007, 15:27WHAT THIS IS
This is a place for everyone of us who tried his- or herself in writing and is brave enough to present it....who wants to start?
:D
Re: WHAT THIS IS
dark_lord - 20.04.2007, 19:17
yeah... i've been trying once and stuff...
i wanted an original story with Jack the Ripper.. so i;ve tried to make my own.. sadly, i never got to end it... it has 3 parts till now... and it's a poem :D
enjoy... i hope :D...
1.From Hell
Reaper’s my forever Lord
The only one I fear.
Five gates I pass to mortal world
To cast despair and fear.
Amongst the living I shall walk,
I’ll kill each on of them.
I will be fast as lightning struck
My Lord awaits in Hell.
When clouds will take the sun’s last breath
I will await in rain.
I will and be your sweetest death
Without remorse or pain.
And from this day till end of world
The Ripper’s name will ask.
The real one cannot be told
So you must please with... Jack.
2. Jacky
I am the tall dark stranger
That walks behind your back.
I am the living shadow
When you're alone in park.
Don't look behind you,
Just keep to walk and cry,
Don't ever scream for help
Do not even try.
My silver blade is shining
Into the moon's sad light,
It gives ya a kiss before you
Run outta my sight.
And feel your body freezing,
But before you die please tell:
The one you met tonight was
Jacky, the angel sent from Hell.
3.Perfect Stranger
The planets are already aligned,
The moon is full and cold
And I’m preparing for the next crime
That people will unsolve.
I see her waiting in the park,
She’s beautiful, so pure but still...
My blade will flash into the dark
And warmth and fear she’ll feel.
Slowly walking, where she’s staying
My job I’ll have to do.
I raise my knife but I hear her saying:
”I was expecting you!”
She turns around, an evil smile,
My knife won’t cut her throat.
Her dark soul from devil’s choir
‘Tis the one that makes me stop.
“I want you my Lord to be,
You are my true love, Jack,
The perfect couple they shall see...”
She whispered in the night.
Hey.. at least i;ve tried :P Cheers :)
Re: WHAT THIS IS
Eddy - 20.04.2007, 19:39
Hey Hunn, that´s not bad!
I mean, I think the second stanza is best, but I can´t tell much about it ´cause it´s not ready! That is such a pity!
Will you finish it once? For meeeeeeeee?
*puppy eyes*
Re: WHAT THIS IS
dark_lord - 20.04.2007, 20:35
i'll try... i'll have to get back in the mood for it.. when the ideas will come back i will surely finish it ;)
Re: WHAT THIS IS
Eddy - 21.04.2007, 10:34
Awwwwww that´s great, can´t wait for it Hunn :D
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