Story Of The Spirit

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    Re: Story Of The Spirit

    Brit - 26.07.2006, 01:41

    Story Of The Spirit
    I wrote it ages ago once when I was bored. I looked back at it earlier and it almost made me cry.

    "Sometimes I sit in the kitchen for hours, and watch her come and go. She takes food out of the cupboards, eats it, then runs to the toilet to throw it back up. Sometimes I sit on the window-sill, staring into her bedroom. She stands in front of the mirror, a look of utter disgust creeping across her face. What she sees isnt what everyone else sees. Her eyes deceive her. Deep down, she knows that, though she chooses not to acknowledge it.

    She sits at her desk, and looks right through me. She doesnt know I am here. I look into her eyes, and I see the tears welling up behind the tear ducts. But I know she will not let them fall. She bottles everything up, all the pain, the anger, and the fears. And she lets them go by cutting herself. I watch her do it. I feel the pain. Blood seeps out of the incisions she has made in her skin. I leave the window sill, and go elsewhere.

    Sometimes I follow her around. I went to school with her once. She sat on her own at the back of a classroom, staring at the test for ten minutes before finally picking up her pen. But her hand was shaking so violently, all she could manage was to tear the paper. She put her head in her hands, and let the tears fall. The other students started at her, and wondered what was wrong. But they never asked. She had always been like that.

    I like to take a stroll in the evenings. Sometimes I come across her, sitting on a random doorstep. She empty vodka bottles give away the fact that she is drunk. Very drunk. She doesn't sit alone though. The other person is trying to support her head. They both look up at the same time. I am standing right in front of them.

    She looks right through me, like she always does. She stares into the space beyond. She cant see me. She doesnt know I exist.
    But the other person looks right into my eyes. She can see everything. She knows I am here."



    Re: Story Of The Spirit

    playbunny - 26.07.2006, 02:12


    thats really good moving and sort of inspirational (sp) but i dont get it, who is the narrator?



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