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Re: i might as well start it out
toad - 05.07.2006, 01:51i might as well start it out
so i was sifting through my My Documents, and what do i find? the only two "poems" i've ever written. which happened to be for english senior year of hs. so what?, 3 years ago, wow. whatever, they suck anyway, i'm just putting them up so they don't get lost in the ether. but yeah, here they are: (exactly how i wrote them, including title)
Peom #1
Tasting the crimson rust in my mouth, I struggle to stand. Hearing the metal, stained with my life, scrape against the ground, seeing sparks fly. The taunting, tauting is all that I can hear, telling me to stay down, asking me if one scar wasn't enough. As I try to answer, I can feel the blood rushing up, mixed with bile and acid. Soon, I realize the floor dosn't look that bad in red. The scraping stops, and before I can even feel the blast of air on my skin, another strike forms upon my face, becoming a crooked "X". One more and I'm out. I try to hold on to my last thread of life, any last seam of hope. I see all the faces that laughed, that wanted, that ridiculed, that feared. They all mean nothing to me. The only one I ever cared for, the only one that could sooth my anger, is now gone. Gone because of my foolishness, my ignorance. Gone forever, because of me. I can't hear the insults now, nor can I see the instrument of my death. I taste no more blood; I feel no more pain. All I have left is my pride. That will be gone soon as well. Everybody said that it would be my smoking that would kill me. Heh, I guess they were wrong.
ranting (aka peom #2)
Whats up with all these anorexic chicks
And all those bulimic ones too
As they’re going down the runway
All they are are skin and bones
Why put on pounds and pounds of makeup
Just to make yourself look “good”
When in reality, all you’re doing
Is making yourself look like a whore
All these teen magazines show
Are all these “perfect” girls
When all they really are
Are plastic surgery and Photoshop
Corporate media is implanting all there ideas in our heads
That if you’re not perfect, then you’re nothing
Well all I have to say to them
Is STFU
yeah, i was really angsty in hs. whatev
Re: i might as well start it out
toad - 05.07.2006, 09:32
found this which i wrote towards the end of last year in an convo. edited of course so it looks good, but yeah:
life, past, love, friends, and, things
life is a fleeting thing, and you have to take the good with the bad. unfortionatly, there's not a lot of good.
the past is filled with memories and regrets, but it makes us who we are. but do we want to be that person. is this who we had in mind, however long ago, when we had no worries and thought nothing could go wrong. is the person you are the same person you were. will it ever be.
love is confusing and real, hard and beautifull. it can't be lived without, and some need it more than others. is it worth risking everything for love. it's a cruel world, but i refuse to beleive that one has to go throughout life without love. love is too good of a thing to be without.
friends are needed. friends are what hold us together. real firends will back you to the end, will always be there for you. without friends, there would be no one to count on. no one you know that will never abandon you. friends are a part of who we are. and to loose them, would be to loose a part of yourself.
maybe i'm too weird for this world. or maybe i think too much. maybe i'll never know the answers to the questions i ask. maybe i was never ment to know. maybe we're all here just to fufill some cosmic order.
or maybe. just maybe, there's is a purpose to all this, and maybe everything will be alright in the end. maybe we will all end up happy.
Re: i might as well start it out
MobiusDeep - 06.07.2006, 07:28
When and if you learn to use expressive and, occasionally, crpytic languge, you'll be wonderful.
Re: i might as well start it out
toad - 06.07.2006, 07:43
meh, if you say so
i doubt it
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