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Windwolf - 03.03.2007, 11:59
Hurricane
Hurricane
It's very windy in this town,
the hurricane shakes everything.
He is horrible tonight,
the wind, the weathers king.
He shakes the trees, he sends the rain,
tonight he has no grace.
A hurricane rages in the town,
you're safe now at no place.
People sit inside their houses
and the wind isn't lower.
They have to sleep until next morning
and then they will see that it will be over.
You like it?
Jimmy Jamboleo - 28.03.2007, 14:34
Yes, I like it! Was it difficult, to wrote this poem??Or easy??
rimmyrais7 - 28.03.2007, 19:25
this is a very nice poem. i like it, too. i can´t write poems in english
Windwolf - 28.03.2007, 22:29
@Jimmy Jamboleo: No, it wasn't very difficult. I'm practised by writing poems in German! ;)
@rimmyrais7: I'm sure you can, if you can write poems in German! You only must find the right words at the end of a line and then you can write all things, what you want to write. x) But a problem could be your English speaking...
Jimmy Jamboleo - 29.03.2007, 17:13
Ok, thank you! First I´ll try to write poems in german, later I´ll try to write it in english! :D Thanks for the advice!
Windwolf - 29.03.2007, 20:37
Yes, you can do this! Perhabs you'll write in English after that better!
rimmyrais7 - 29.03.2007, 21:40
i can good speak english :cry:
Jimmy Jamboleo - 29.03.2007, 22:29
Yvonne, you can speak english in an good manner, but in this topic we talk about poems and not about your english problems!
Windwolf - 29.03.2007, 22:42
@rimmyrais: No you can't, your sentence is terrible.
rimmyrais7 - 30.03.2007, 13:57
shout up i speak the all day now in english without german and i can this very good
Windwolf - 14.04.2007, 14:39
"Shout up" is very badly to say to the Admin. So you know, why you were blocked for a time. There was a lot of more things that were bad but this is a reason, too.
rimmyrais7 - 08.07.2007, 20:21
but now i´m not more blocked
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